Your experience and talent are evident in this effort. When you choose a subject matter with significant character respect as a prime factor you always hit a 4basebagger. I wonder when some other good writers will understand that You Author are primo entertainment and very much worth the read. Thanks - With Very High Regard
it sure was fun while it lasted! Sounds like those college boys must have had a bit of a complex trying to make her happy. Alls well that ends well. Regards, Jack
Jack you are the best writer of sex scenes I have ever read on lite. Is it because of your orientation or what? I don't even touch myself and I'm ready to shoot. Anyway this story was awesome. With very high regards, Luis
a so so story...nothing dynamic
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A Story Teller - Again
Your experience and talent are evident in this effort.
When you choose a subject matter with significant character respect as a prime factor you always hit a 4basebagger.
I wonder when some other good writers will understand that
You Author are primo entertainment and very much worth the read.
Thanks - With Very High Regard
Words for the ages:
it sure was fun while it lasted!
Sounds like those college boys must have had a bit of a complex trying to make her happy.
Alls well that ends well.
Regards, Jack
Excellent!!!
Jack you are the best writer of sex scenes I have ever read on lite. Is it because of your orientation or what? I don't even touch myself and I'm ready to shoot. Anyway this story was awesome. With very high regards, Luis
cradle snatcher
a so so story...nothing dynamic
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