Unfortunately, as soon as Uncle William died, I knew that his spirit would invade the Nobbin. Nonetheless, it was well written, creative, imaginative, and did not disappoint. I loved it. Besides, the fact that the old uncle is doing the neice is a bonus.
I can see this piece continuing. Every time she feels alone or depressed, the horny little nobbin comes to life and comes to her sexual rescue to make her feel better.
Good job. Great story.
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Anonymous05/08/07
Good Story
A well written story and well plotted, though it was a bit obvious what was going to happen. I liked the build up but thought the ending could had a little more depth. Having said all that I thought it was fun and sexy, write some more!!
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Anonymous06/10/07
It was great!
Although I could kind of see where it was going, you wrote this short story very well. It was eloquent, and a little funny at times, and sexy as hell.
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Anonymous08/21/07
Well I liked it quite much
Not sure why everyone else felt let down. The narrator got a thoroughly delicious orgasm while giving her injured husband a wonderful birthday present. Everyone's happy. Where's the let down?
English
That's it???
All the build up for nothing. It was a let down.
nice story
I liked it. And who knows how many repeat performances there will be in the future... such a nobbin will come in handy :)
Good job. Great story.
Unfortunately, as soon as Uncle William died, I knew that his spirit would invade the Nobbin. Nonetheless, it was well written, creative, imaginative, and did not disappoint. I loved it. Besides, the fact that the old uncle is doing the neice is a bonus.
I can see this piece continuing. Every time she feels alone or depressed, the horny little nobbin comes to life and comes to her sexual rescue to make her feel better.
Good job. Great story.
Good Story
A well written story and well plotted, though it was a bit obvious what was going to happen. I liked the build up but thought the ending could had a little more depth. Having said all that I thought it was fun and sexy, write some more!!
It was great!
Although I could kind of see where it was going, you wrote this short story very well. It was eloquent, and a little funny at times, and sexy as hell.
Well I liked it quite much
Not sure why everyone else felt let down. The narrator got a thoroughly delicious orgasm while giving her injured husband a wonderful birthday present. Everyone's happy. Where's the let down?
No let-down at all
Great story - not a bad way to spend one's afterlife!
Wonderfully Well Done
while it was easy to see where the story was heading, I found it very well written and an excellent read
great read!
I agree - there is nothing quite like a good nobbin! We all have the equivalent in our little toy stash, now don't we ladies??
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