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by PEATBOG04/26/07

Not as good as Chapter 01!!!!!!!

Well Waltario, an entertaining follow up on the original but IMHO just not as good. The ending was rushed leaving the impression that you had simply 'run out of ideas'! I think that many fans will be disappointed that your hero was unable to give the lovely Dana the truly loving, long term relationship that she needed. Despite this, Your excellent writing style deserves my high mark. Pete.

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by Anonymous04/26/07

Not bad but not as good as chapter one.

I agree with Peatbog that it was still entertaining but not as good as chapter one. I do enjoy all of your stories and I always search the list for your name. Please do keep writing and keep us entertained with your imagination.

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