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We Are Still Breathing

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by Du Lac04/19/07

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This is a powerful write. I loved the breaks that make one stop and let the meaning of the last line take focus in your mind.
thank you
du lac

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by unapologetic04/19/07

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The first time I read it, I have to say that I didn't care for it. But I read it again, and I started to see what you were trying to do. I still think there is something more you could do here, even though I'm not sure what it is. It just doesn't feel flesh-out enough, for lack of a better way of saying it. Almost like you were holding something back, if that makes sense.

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by LeBroz04/24/07

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Feels like a different look at the thoughts raised in "The Hand You've Been Dealt." It feels like a softer look here.

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