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Full Moon of Desire Ch. 01

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by Anonymous07/08/07

Arousing

Getting quite interesting, but the story would be much improved if checked with a grammar checker or reviewed by a good editor -- its vs it's; lie-lay, lay-laid, "to big" for "too big" ... sentence fragments, run-on sentences, using commas instead of periods at sentence breaks.

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by Anonymous07/26/08

A very good beginning..

to what looks like a very good story. I hope you will tell us more about the male werewolf and how he became one. Wolfmann

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by Anonymous02/17/12

Dry opinion

Passionate, arousing, interesting, too short though. Great read!

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