by ZotDragon
Good story, but started too fast, her just grabbing his cock suddenly isn't real, and detracts from the good parts of the rest of the story...
Too short but hope this will be a long series. How many more students will she fuck?
Nice and straight to the point...great change from blowhard authors who want to be Joseph Frickin Conrad and spend hours on describing nothing happening. A few grammatical and spelling errors, though. Still, great fantasy story (anyone who's looking for something realistic is at the wrong web site)...I look forward to the rest of the series.