All Comments on 'My Teacher Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Not Bad

Good story, but started too fast, her just grabbing his cock suddenly isn't real, and detracts from the good parts of the rest of the story...

oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
Great Start

Too short but hope this will be a long series. How many more students will she fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
If only this happened in real life....

Nice and straight to the point...great change from blowhard authors who want to be Joseph Frickin Conrad and spend hours on describing nothing happening. A few grammatical and spelling errors, though. Still, great fantasy story (anyone who's looking for something realistic is at the wrong web site)...I look forward to the rest of the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good stuff

Good setup for the next chapter. Keep the details coming.

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