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Huh...
huh, where's the horror, maybe non-consent or BDSM, but certainly NOT horror which is a pity because it's my favorite category and not this crap.
The horror
In answer to the comment "where is the horror", this is a long story - about 12 parts. That the pt 1 tag was left off is my fault, however, the story contains a clear marker that there is more to come. That is, the first part has a key element clearly entered into the tex; "Chapter 1". So it seems that your observation skills are somewhat lacking and your rush to judgement that this is "crap" seems a bit childish and rather premature.
Dean
I enjoyed it
I very much enjoyed your story. I got so into it that I completely forgot that it was in the Horror catagory. I am pleased to see that you inted for there to be more chapters. I am eagerly awaiting them!
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