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by Anonymous

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by bbare04/28/07

WOW

Very, very erotic! Good character developement and the ending was left open for at least a part 2. Would love more details on Jolene's body. Also, how about a little extra fun when they're not camping but rather at home in their bedrooms? Gave you the highest score because it WAS so hot :-)

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by catsr2wild04/29/07

2 Thumbs up!!!!

Many Feathers as always you have done an outstanding job....

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by Anonymous04/29/07

Rerun

This is a re-run. Write something original.

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by ViSexual04/29/07

Different ending?

I was hoping that it'd end with the 'girls' having the same plan and the two couples not actually swapping because the gals had gone into each other's tents.

All four of them enjoying the sex more, thinking they were getting strange!

Then, after they realized and all four knew they were willing, and wanting, to swap..., well then!

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by Anonymous04/29/07

Isn't this a re-post?

Repost?

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by Wilson Spalding05/01/07

Dust off the tent!

Too much fun... Don't know if it's a rerun, but it's a good one. ViSexual (below) had a great idea to draw it out a little, but that *might* have made it too long. The editing (for pacing) was really well done.

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by Anonymous05/10/08

REAL HOT

i will rate it as one of the hottest foursome stories ever

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by Anonymous05/06/09

Great excitement!

I really loved this one, thanks for some real excitement.



Only thing i didnt like was the "man and woman are always cumming together" parts of the story

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by Anonymous10/06/16

USUAL STORY...MAN AND WIFE

WANT TO FUCK ANOTHER COUPLE BUT THEN WIVES ALWAYS END UP DOING A 69 ON EACH OTHER..WHY???????

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