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A Curse is Broken

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/30/07

HAHA!

LMAO! You obviously have very deep issues with black women. Absolutely deranged!

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by Anonymous05/05/07

Good story!

I liked it!

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by Anonymous05/10/07

So sad, but I get it

Easy read, but I have to agree with the other feedback. You clearly hate black women...almost as much as I hate black men. I take no joy in hating black men and I don't even know exactly when it happened. One day I just knew in my soul that I didn't respect them as men.

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by Anonymous07/16/13

Stories need dialogue

I started reading, but it got boring halfway through, dialogue is important to keep the reader engaged and break away from descriptions

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