I really enjoyed this, well written, very exciting tease-- Nice job!
Very Nice Darlin, Hope there will be a part two....
Superb start of your new Lit career T_T!
TT, I love the image you've created in your story and now in my mind. I'd love to read more... :rose:
Great story Tasty ... If all of your future stories are this good, I can't wait to read them
Nothing like a good daydream to get the blood flowing. Sounds like a lady I'd like to find on my balcony.
Love the Teaze here--feel you in this through out--Well done!
A very nice read, one that was very enjoyable thanks for sharing it. :-)
TT - you did a superb job hunny -- the words drew a very erotic picture and man the way you ended it was excellent Kisses :rose:
Very nicely done....short and sweet....just enough to please yet leaving enough out to tease. *winks* Hope that you write another story soon.
Lovely, sexy story
I get the feeling you will go on, getting "warmer" as you unleash your thoughts, where is the devil smilie.
A belcony is such a nice place to start an adventure.
Teasingly romantic Tasty_Teaze I can't wait to see your next submission.
Excellent first story. Liked the plot and romanticism and the way you placed the words. Would expect more stories from you....cheers !!
Nice story...romantic lovely settings......good work
Wow, very nice story. excellent base and strong storyline. with a twist. I'll be looking for more of your stories.
Great job on this submission!
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Excellent exciting tease!
I really enjoyed this, well written, very exciting tease--
Nice job!
Great Start Miss Teaze
Very Nice Darlin, Hope there will be a part two....
Great job, for a virgin :P
Superb start of your new Lit career T_T!
Such a nice vision
TT, I love the image you've created in your story and now in my mind. I'd love to read more...
:rose:
Awesome Story
Great story Tasty ... If all of your future stories are this good, I can't wait to read them
Well done!
Nothing like a good daydream to get the blood flowing. Sounds like a lady I'd like to find on my balcony.
Awesome GF
Love the Teaze here--feel you in this through out--Well done!
Nice first story. . .
A very nice read, one that was very enjoyable thanks for sharing it. :-)
wow
TT - you did a superb job hunny -- the words drew a very erotic picture and man the way you ended it was excellent
Kisses :rose:
Great job!
Very nicely done....short and sweet....just enough to please yet leaving enough out to tease. *winks* Hope that you write another story soon.
very nice...
Lovely, sexy story
A Lovely Beginning
I get the feeling you will go on, getting "warmer" as you unleash your thoughts, where is the devil smilie.
Delightful Fantasy
A belcony is such a nice place to start an adventure.
Good Job
Teasingly romantic Tasty_Teaze I can't wait to see your next submission.
Incredibly Romantic !
Excellent first story. Liked the plot and romanticism and the way you placed the words. Would expect more stories from you....cheers !!
Nice story..well written
Nice story...romantic lovely settings......good work
Wow, very nice story. excellent base and strong storyline. with a twist. I'll be looking for more of your stories.
Loved it!!
Great job on this submission!
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