I was going over some of the questions left by other readers and one which repeated stuck out. Why is the husband, indeed most of the husband characters in thecelt stories so generous towards their disrespectful cheating wives?
Having worked with children of divorced families and their parents, I can testify that indeed in real life such generosity (especially in divorces which are not 'amicable') is more of an exception than the rule.
In my opinion it goes back to the personality traits of the
author himself, or at least to those of his alter ego - projected in the stories. No one can deny the author the artistic freedom to let the main characters choose what they might consider as the high road. They could argue 'I am not lowering my self to her level, no matter how self degrading she chose to be. By being decent I am remaining loyal to my own self esteem, respecting myself, not her. If anything, sooner rather than later the children would make the comparison between the way I treated her and the way she treated me and come to their own conclusions.
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Anonymous01/12/09
Sorry I disagree with the story and agree with
some of the posters. This woman was a cheat, a slut, and since she was fucking someone involved in her work she is a whore/prostitute. Why would the husband leave the home? Why would the husband give primary care to a slut, and unfit mother? He can show to a judge her actions, her plans, and the lack of interest in the home and children by the investigation, why let her have custody at all? She is by virtue of her actions and unfit role model and an unfit mother. And as many have stated why give her more than a man would get in the same situation? She has a good paying job she can pay child support to the husband. Sorry cheats like her are pure trash, he threw her away but left her the opportunity to destroy her childrens lives. It is child abuse to leave the children with her!
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Anonymous01/12/09
look stop trying too please the cheater
he shouldn't gave her shit and kept the kids.any judge seen them pictures of her and loverboy would give hubby the kids.why do you as a writer try so hard too help the cheaters and be kind to them.this whoreslut intentionally destory this family.there no love in war and she the enemy.the divorce is to destory her,not be good to her.
Good story but Rick was a shithead. He was too possessive when he could have simply kept quiet and let things run their course. This is what is wrong with the United States of America today that George W. Bush Jr. formulated over the past 8 years.
Good story but Rick was a shithead. He was too possessive when he could have simply kept quiet and let things run their course. This is what is wrong with the United States of America today that George W. Bush Jr. formulated over the past 8 years.
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Anonymous03/04/09
Well
Good story, but dumbass commenters abound. "He could have let it run its' course?" Typical liberal bullshit, methinks. Not unlike letting towelhead assholes run amuck, killing everybody they can, and assuming that "it will run its' course" and get back to normal. Not unlike watching the fucking Dow Jones drop like a rock since November 4th when the "annointed one" took office, and while that "runs its' course" people are losing their investments, their jobs and their homes. Shit, is this guy in favor of letting CANCER run its' course too? When you see a problem, disease, sickness.....you need to heal it, cut it out, do whatever it takes, but letting a bad or evil thing "run its' course" is dumb in fantasy and dumber in real life.
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Anonymous03/04/09
Anon - "Well" stated a very analysis of this story
and of course, a sterling point of view regarding the previous "anon's" comments. No doubt the "anointed one" in the presidential office thinks the he/she team will solve all the problems - yah, right & then hell freezes over. John
Sorry Celt but I can not stop chuckling over that last comment. DW is sure digging his own grave, The anti comments are getting worse and worse. This guy (or girl) has no shame or a very thick skin. Jim
This series is one of the best on the site. The man is man enough and not a wimp. I personally wish there were a million more stories in this series so it would never end. :) I gave it a 5 star as always. :)
She thought she had it made. Fucking bitch ( I'm being kind in that there are many other names I would usually call such a person). She was wrong and she paid for her stupidity.
But now it won't be as fun because there is no love. Only raw sex. Fucking cheating skank blew it. No husbands love. No kids love. Just what a cheating cunt gets.
The revenge, is that every time she has sex with a man it will remind her of her stupid, selfish destruction of her own family. I have seen a couple of stupid women like this, and yes things did end badly for them. They both broke up with their current lovers, each went on to steal a husband from another family, just so they wouldn't have to be alone. Scum. The men they lured were fools as well. After the second time I saw this happen, I realized that these women were shit, and while they were both attractive women, they had always been shit. Men just let pretty women get away with acting like shit because they want a chance to fuck them. Instead, they get fucked!
The real loser? Try the husband, she gets the house, half of everything and if her salary was less than his.. try alimony.. Now, Wes and her can have and enjoy sex in the house, instead of the office, or chair or couch. No more sneaking around and on the topic of boys well, no law about bringing Wes into the house no law about adultery not even considered contributing to the delinquency of a minor! Too bad, she will stop crying and soon enjoy what she will reap financially and continue too just as long as she does not marry again, and why would she, she has everything now and then some. Oh, if the husband has a business and is the owner, she gets half of his interest too. Not bad for what 15 years of marriage, find that anywhere else dare you?
Consequences are a bitch,and so was she! She got exactly what she deserved! Her ex should really try to mess her over in the divorce,using the photos,if not in the courts,as a threat of exposure to her family,friends,and those at her workplace.
At least in this story,the stupid,cheating wife gets caught.
This was a very good story. It was well put together, well written and interesting to read. The ending you left was good for you to be able to write another part/chapter to it. Which I hope you do. I really liked this story. 4 stars worth.
She's a slut with a self-centered streak for excitement and pussy pleasure.
It's not uncommon for women like her to groom growing sons to become her breeders. By the time they learn the truth of why Mom and Dad split, they might thank Dad for leaving because they're already fucking Mom.
I could give you a detailed story on a 25 year old woman who started her 4 yr. old son (by her brother) licking her pussy and was teaching him to fuck her when he was five.... using kegel exercises to be able to squeeze his little pecker while he's fucking her. She says she has orgasms just like when her brother fucks her but her son doesn't cum.... just keeps fucking her and making her cum over and over again. She says she cums so much that she soaks him. I tried to talk her down from what she was doing but she's so weird and into it that she got offended and stopped talking to me. When I was 4 and 5, I was coached by two neighborhood sisters, 8 and 9 yrs old, to fuck them. They were girls, not adults... but I really did fuck them a LOT. They told me to not tell anyone and I didn't so we never got caught. Too bad we left the State when the war ended. (When I grew up, I learned that my dad was plugging most of the war wives and, when the war ended, he knew there were a bunch of experienced killers coming home who'd be keen to 'speak with' the man who'd been comforting their wives and had given them one or two extra kids.)
thecelt has created his own genre and done it very well.
I'm glad to find out there is a follow-on to this story.
Judith Revisited.
We get to find out what happened and what the consequences really were.
If I'd been Rick, here's how I would have handled it.
That first time, when I heard and then saw her fucking Wes, I would have stepped into her office and said, "The kids and I thought you'd enjoy a milkshake." ... then tossed the container in their direction, which would have popped the lid and spilled it out onto the carpet, (and probably their clothes) before turning and leaving the building. ... That would have been the end of us. I wouldn't have needed to 'think about it' or 'wait to see what happened'. That's pure bullshit, unless you're a wimp who's looking for an excuse to accept being cheated on.
She knew what she was doing and (but loves her husband) was definitely enjoying it (while loving her husband).... but she didn't realize that it meant the end of her marriage. (because they're alone in her office, it's private and she's just too Goddamned smart to get caught)
Beautiful cunts are Dick magnets and even if Rick hadn't found out about Wes, she'd proven to herself that she can have any cock she wants and get away with it so, sooner or later, there would have been others.
Revisiting Judith
I was going over some of the questions left by other readers and one which repeated stuck out. Why is the husband, indeed most of the husband characters in thecelt stories so generous towards their disrespectful cheating wives?
Having worked with children of divorced families and their parents, I can testify that indeed in real life such generosity (especially in divorces which are not 'amicable') is more of an exception than the rule.
In my opinion it goes back to the personality traits of the
author himself, or at least to those of his alter ego - projected in the stories. No one can deny the author the artistic freedom to let the main characters choose what they might consider as the high road. They could argue 'I am not lowering my self to her level, no matter how self degrading she chose to be. By being decent I am remaining loyal to my own self esteem, respecting myself, not her. If anything, sooner rather than later the children would make the comparison between the way I treated her and the way she treated me and come to their own conclusions.
Sorry I disagree with the story and agree with
some of the posters. This woman was a cheat, a slut, and since she was fucking someone involved in her work she is a whore/prostitute. Why would the husband leave the home? Why would the husband give primary care to a slut, and unfit mother? He can show to a judge her actions, her plans, and the lack of interest in the home and children by the investigation, why let her have custody at all? She is by virtue of her actions and unfit role model and an unfit mother. And as many have stated why give her more than a man would get in the same situation? She has a good paying job she can pay child support to the husband. Sorry cheats like her are pure trash, he threw her away but left her the opportunity to destroy her childrens lives. It is child abuse to leave the children with her!
look stop trying too please the cheater
he shouldn't gave her shit and kept the kids.any judge seen them pictures of her and loverboy would give hubby the kids.why do you as a writer try so hard too help the cheaters and be kind to them.this whoreslut intentionally destory this family.there no love in war and she the enemy.the divorce is to destory her,not be good to her.
Rick is a shithead!
Good story but Rick was a shithead. He was too possessive when he could have simply kept quiet and let things run their course. This is what is wrong with the United States of America today that George W. Bush Jr. formulated over the past 8 years.
Rick is a shithead!
Good story but Rick was a shithead. He was too possessive when he could have simply kept quiet and let things run their course. This is what is wrong with the United States of America today that George W. Bush Jr. formulated over the past 8 years.
Well
Good story, but dumbass commenters abound. "He could have let it run its' course?" Typical liberal bullshit, methinks. Not unlike letting towelhead assholes run amuck, killing everybody they can, and assuming that "it will run its' course" and get back to normal. Not unlike watching the fucking Dow Jones drop like a rock since November 4th when the "annointed one" took office, and while that "runs its' course" people are losing their investments, their jobs and their homes. Shit, is this guy in favor of letting CANCER run its' course too? When you see a problem, disease, sickness.....you need to heal it, cut it out, do whatever it takes, but letting a bad or evil thing "run its' course" is dumb in fantasy and dumber in real life.
Anon - "Well" stated a very analysis of this story
and of course, a sterling point of view regarding the previous "anon's" comments. No doubt the "anointed one" in the presidential office thinks the he/she team will solve all the problems - yah, right & then hell freezes over. John
a 40-something woman
a dried up old hide! 1*.
Sorry
Sorry Celt but I can not stop chuckling over that last comment. DW is sure digging his own grave, The anti comments are getting worse and worse. This guy (or girl) has no shame or a very thick skin. Jim
one of the best series on the site.
This series is one of the best on the site. The man is man enough and not a wimp. I personally wish there were a million more stories in this series so it would never end. :) I gave it a 5 star as always. :)
Wow ! ! !
some of the DW commare drawing a little blood here and there, but it is understandable from the nature of his or her, old hide comments.
Excellent
She thought she had it made. Fucking bitch ( I'm being kind in that there are many other names I would usually call such a person). She was wrong and she paid for her stupidity.
DON'T CHEAT ON YOUR SPOUSE
Bullshit
Slut was going to have Wess to fuck over and over - whore was never going to really break it off.
Probably
But now it won't be as fun because there is no love. Only raw sex. Fucking cheating skank blew it. No husbands love. No kids love. Just what a cheating cunt gets.
Damn
Loved it
Well written. Thanks.
Revenge
The revenge, is that every time she has sex with a man it will remind her of her stupid, selfish destruction of her own family. I have seen a couple of stupid women like this, and yes things did end badly for them. They both broke up with their current lovers, each went on to steal a husband from another family, just so they wouldn't have to be alone. Scum. The men they lured were fools as well. After the second time I saw this happen, I realized that these women were shit, and while they were both attractive women, they had always been shit. Men just let pretty women get away with acting like shit because they want a chance to fuck them. Instead, they get fucked!
Short and sweet.
At least she wasn't a delusional bitch who thought he would come back. "My love for you is gone" is much better than "I still love you, but..."
You're really good
Yup, Judy, just another stupid, cheating, whoring, cock before kids witch. Too bad she didn't remember her family sooner. 5*****
Great Story
The real loser? Try the husband, she gets the house, half of everything and if her salary was less than his.. try alimony.. Now, Wes and her can have and enjoy sex in the house, instead of the office, or chair or couch. No more sneaking around and on the topic of boys well, no law about bringing Wes into the house no law about adultery not even considered contributing to the delinquency of a minor! Too bad, she will stop crying and soon enjoy what she will reap financially and continue too just as long as she does not marry again, and why would she, she has everything now and then some. Oh, if the husband has a business and is the owner, she gets half of his interest too. Not bad for what 15 years of marriage, find that anywhere else dare you?
A Rightful End!
Consequences are a bitch,and so was she! She got exactly what she deserved! Her ex should really try to mess her over in the divorce,using the photos,if not in the courts,as a threat of exposure to her family,friends,and those at her workplace.
At least in this story,the stupid,cheating wife gets caught.
Nice job
This was a very good story. It was well put together, well written and interesting to read. The ending you left was good for you to be able to write another part/chapter to it. Which I hope you do. I really liked this story. 4 stars worth.
She's a slut with a self-centered streak for excitement and pussy pleasure.
It's not uncommon for women like her to groom growing sons to become her breeders. By the time they learn the truth of why Mom and Dad split, they might thank Dad for leaving because they're already fucking Mom.
I could give you a detailed story on a 25 year old woman who started her 4 yr. old son (by her brother) licking her pussy and was teaching him to fuck her when he was five.... using kegel exercises to be able to squeeze his little pecker while he's fucking her. She says she has orgasms just like when her brother fucks her but her son doesn't cum.... just keeps fucking her and making her cum over and over again. She says she cums so much that she soaks him. I tried to talk her down from what she was doing but she's so weird and into it that she got offended and stopped talking to me. When I was 4 and 5, I was coached by two neighborhood sisters, 8 and 9 yrs old, to fuck them. They were girls, not adults... but I really did fuck them a LOT. They told me to not tell anyone and I didn't so we never got caught. Too bad we left the State when the war ended. (When I grew up, I learned that my dad was plugging most of the war wives and, when the war ended, he knew there were a bunch of experienced killers coming home who'd be keen to 'speak with' the man who'd been comforting their wives and had given them one or two extra kids.)
OH NO! WHAT HAVE I DONE?
whatever it was, her memory was revived by the photos. TK U MLJ LV NV
It's official
thecelt has created his own genre and done it very well.
I'm glad to find out there is a follow-on to this story.
Judith Revisited.
We get to find out what happened and what the consequences really were.
If I'd been Rick, here's how I would have handled it.
That first time, when I heard and then saw her fucking Wes, I would have stepped into her office and said, "The kids and I thought you'd enjoy a milkshake." ... then tossed the container in their direction, which would have popped the lid and spilled it out onto the carpet, (and probably their clothes) before turning and leaving the building. ... That would have been the end of us. I wouldn't have needed to 'think about it' or 'wait to see what happened'. That's pure bullshit, unless you're a wimp who's looking for an excuse to accept being cheated on.
She knew what she was doing and (but loves her husband) was definitely enjoying it (while loving her husband).... but she didn't realize that it meant the end of her marriage. (because they're alone in her office, it's private and she's just too Goddamned smart to get caught)
Beautiful cunts are Dick magnets and even if Rick hadn't found out about Wes, she'd proven to herself that she can have any cock she wants and get away with it so, sooner or later, there would have been others.
i wish i was around when these were first released. i love thecelt.
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