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School Crossing Guard Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by coaster204/30/07

It's really a four and a half!

I gave it a five, but I thought the finish was a bit rushed. I liked the suspense even though you could see it coming. As always, however, well written and worth the read.
Coaster

PS: I didn't wait for later, I cheated!

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by LEATBT05/01/07

Nice writing

Good twist, fooled me!

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by Unbridled_Passion05/02/07

well, well...

is she a psycho tricking him by saying she is pregnant, or does she really love him? Can't wait to find out!

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