What a lovley tale, it really kept my interest and is very well written, believeable even. Now...to find a centaur!
WOW! Its an amazing story. Very well written, and very vivid detail. Hoping for a sequel!
This is the best story that I have read on this site. I hope you write a sequel. I loved it and the details and the writing was well done.
A beautiful love story, sexy as hell. This is true erotic literature, not just a bang-em-up story.
Keep it up, I loved this story!
A wonderful, "captivating" tale that could and likely would be snatched up by any publisher worth His/Her salt if expanded and made into a short story or novel...
You have a rare talent for drawing the mind into the reality You spin, making it the reader's reality as well...
You seem to have a handle on the Centaur genre. Please use your significant talent and write more.
You really know how to write so please keep it up!!
I have to say I truly enjoyed the story! I look forward to more from you please.
Really weird, but really good.
Never read anything like it, but just let my mind go and loved it. Great story. I want more!
good story and subject:) enchanting
One of my favorite stories on this site, feel free to write more. I loved the detail, as well as how you told more of their traditions such as the butt plug.
Really amazing loved the attention to detail. Exciting and compelling you should write more!
Honestly, one of the best stories I've read - anywhere, ever!! You are extremely talented! Thank you
I loved the story other than the fact of sharing mates.
LOVED YOUR STOREY. FOUND IT TRULY EROTIC. MY KIND OF FANTASY! MORE SEXUAL ENCOUNTERS MAY HAVE BEEN MORE SATISFYING, FOR ME ANYWAY. LOVED YOUR CHARACTER ALSO......BRAVO XO PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS WITH OTHER CREATURE ANIMALS, PREGNANCY, AND BIRTHS. LOTS OF LUCK.....WELL DONE.
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