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by Anonymous05/01/07

An excellent start

Hot, nicely written, and plenty of room to expand the story from there. Keep it coming. I'm looking forward to it.

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by Anonymous05/02/07

Agree, Good Start

You could fill it in more with a prequel telling about his accident and how he learned about his mc powers, prior sexual conquests, etc.

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by Anonymous01/31/17

Such a good story please continue!!

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