All Comments on 'An Unexpected Surprise'

He's getting played like a YoYo. And he's too wrapped up in his lust to see it. Boy is he in for a surprise. Dummy.

TYPICAL WOMAN THING TAKING MEN FOR JERKS WHILE THEY GET OFF WITH EACH OTHER....LOAD OF BOLLOCKS

Your writing always makes me hot-- and I find myself teasing my clit! Please continue

The story had potential, but the unrealistic and awkward dialogue ruined it.

GREAT STORY AND OH YEAH, DOESN'T IT JUST DOUBLE YOUR DICK OVER TO THE BREAKING POINT WHEN A FUCK WIT ANON CUMS UP WITH A DUMB ASS, UN-CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENT THAT APPARENTLY MAKE SO LITTLE SENSE YOU JUST KNOW THEY'VE NEVER, NOT ONCE EVER WROTE ANYTHING BUT DUMB ASS IGNORANT COMMENTS, lol YEAH?

A really hot/erotic story but a little disappointing in that it didn't go into the experience with the neighbors. This story would have been even hotter if the neighbor on neighbor action had included male on male as well as female on female.

Oh, I have to agree with RanDog025 about the other comments made on this story, the derogatory comments about men being fools, led astray, etc. I have to agree with RanDog025, THOSE ANONYMOUS COMMENTS ARE COWARDLY...THEY HIDE BEHIND ANONYMITY WHILE BEING SO HIGH AMD MIGHTY!

Either take some joy from the short story written for you, for US...or move on and leave your vitriol to burn in your bowels!

**5** Stars for this short, nasty story...

Really need a part 2 here. Can't just leave this hanging. Good story and ... the rest of the story.