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this is incredibly erotic
A most incredible erotic encounter of two people that are appearently very attuned to each other.
A little more detail
Great premise, good execution. Need a little bit more info though; half the time it sounds like the neck of the bottle is inside, half the time it sounds like the "meat" of the bottle. And how did it feel inside her? Cold? Hard? Thick? Rough? Smooth? etc. Otherwise, great story, hope to read more...
A bit more with the details
Excellent first story. I especially like how you started to get descriptive about the stretching and girth. Tat being said, I would recommend more details when describing how she felt (the bottle being inserted, the glass stretching the walls of her pussy, the ribs of the bottle neck bumping across her clit...etc).
All in all, I thought it was an excellent first post. Now how about some more of Sara_Mystery's thoughts......
awesome!!!
great buildup and nice finish!!! gets you really thinking that you are there. great first story and hope to read more from you mystery. cheers!!!
VERY EROTIC!!
A great build up and CLIMAX! A nice start to train a luscious sub/lover to get VERY NAUGHTY!
You Shake My Soul
Erotica at it's very best.I found the story sexually intoxicating.For a few moments on a sultry English evening I became "Keith".Hopefully the first of many stories that bring me into Sarah's world.
Way To Go!
What a good start in erotica! One has GOT to like the way your mind works, Sarah!
Your wishes are my ...
Thank you for all of your comments. I wanted to leave a little something to the imagination but I will enjoy fulfilling the 'more detail' requests.
I love fulfilling your wishes,
Sarah
Sarah .. A lady totally in touch with sexuality!
Sarah!
What a wonderful story of sensuality and arousal. You left just enough to my imagination to bring me personally right into the afternoon. For a short time I truly thought it was just you and me.
In fact, my mind has drifted back often to that wonderful afternoon.
Very very erptic
Very erotic, and certainly most arousing.I eagerly await for more from you sarah...Steve
Mmmmm yes
Mmmmmmmmm yes Sarah very hot and very descriptive loved it very much and look forward to another Eroticly charged story
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