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Nice job, DG!
I had fun doing these stories with one of the best authors on this site.
This was a fun read and well written.
Great job! Regards, Jack
Best all around story I think you have EVER done
really. What makes it great is that you capture the essence of what it like .. what one has to be PREPARED to do to be a Man. This story is Not over stated and contrived. I just love this one.
BULLY!!!
DG Hear!
Please take the time to read Hey Joe by my friend Jake Rivers (formally know as Dynamite Jack) He wrote a really great one. It's posted just above mone today. (5-06-07)Thanks to all the readers and hope to read your comments.
DG Hear
DG you left out the best parts
Like when she decided to start fucking guys behind her husbands back and all that.
A good Young Love story
A very good story a very young couple from high school on.. He had to prove to himself that he would protect her, regardless how outsized his opponent is.. I think most men are like this.. Mess with my girl, you're dog meat.
It's nice to read a good love story
DG,
especially when it's written by a great author. Ain't young love grand? Thank You. Ronnie W.
An excellent collaboration!!!
Well DG, any collaboration of yours with Jake Rivers (aka DJ) is bound to be good. I enjoyed Jake's contribution and found yours to be equally enjoyable. Although the stories and characters were different I find your writing styles to be very complementary. DG, I love your work – you frequently bring tears, whether of sadness or joy, to my eyes and I thank you for it. Pete.
Good story!
A good shorty story, thank you for writing it. :)
Good romance
Very good romance. It is so funny to me to hear about using an equalizer. My Dad always told me that there is no such thing as a fair fight. Someone always has an advantage. He said don’t wait for the other guy to swing first and use whatever you can find to even things up. If it appears to be a one on one fight then take it on and see what you can do to them. Don’t ever let them get up till you are sure the fight is really over. That can be dirty fighting to some of my friends and to me it is whatever you think you need to do, short of a sucker punch, works for me. If you get the first blow in it certainly tilts the ring in your favor. I am a fairly built individual but there is always someone bigger and I have probably lost as many fights as won over the years. If I’m not being paid to keep the peace then whatever works for me is it. Being a bouncer is for suckers as you can and do get sued even when you are bonded by the establishment.Thank God at my age, I am now smart enough to laugh at any instigators as it now seems kind of dumb the stuff we use to fight about. This story was a matter of honor and defense of a loved one and that will always be a whole different world
Well done as always. Thanks for the great entertainment!PT
Nice effort!
Wow, 'DG,' high school was so long ago. Vicariously experiencing once again those travails of youth which we all thought insurmountable. Your story brought back memories, not necessarily of fighting, but just high school memories in general. That alone made this read worthwhile. While not the most sophisticated story or plot, you certainly accomplished your goal: putting an enjoyable and plausible tale to that song. Well done!
another great story from one of the best here
Every time I see a new story authored by you, I read it. Each one is a new masterpiece.
Can’t get much better than that
I feel a bit guilty - correction more then a bit guilty,make it very guilty for not getting to put few words of appreciation to this wonderful story. It happens to me sometimes, when I want to say more, then I postpone it a bit, and you see the result. So much for my Mia- Culpa. I have already commented on “Hey Joe”. As the famous line from Seinfeld goes: “Not that there is anything wrong with it”, from what I could see the two stories do not seem like a product of collaboration. The two plots are totally unrelated. But in their approach to the way of telling the story I did find similarity. I have no idea if you guys collaborated on that, or if it was accidental or perhaps the influence of being inspired by a poem? I am just throwing wild speculations I felt that both stylistically and thematically the two story shared a similar approach which bordering on epic (not by the number of pages though) We see in both stories a full picture of life; of a period in time; of a small society with its norms and customs. In fact, the story promises less and does more – just the way I like it (You get much more than you expect). The beauty of it is that the core plot and characters all come out more credible and winning of course. As I mentioned in my comments to “Hey Joe”, both authors let their heroes win the girl’s heart at the end, which makes most reader (as opposed to many authors in lit) mostly happy.
Another common quality is the masterful quality of the narrative. It gets credibly woven into the characters, understands them from within, and a bit more than they do themselves. You simply feel that you learn something about another corner of the American experience –and when it’s done right (true picture –including the grey and the dark shades) it just can’t get much better than that.
A Great Story
I loved the story DG I thought that Buddy was going to put the moves on Gloria i guess i feels like he got the short end of the bat so to speak.
Joey should have said yes to buddy and while he was dancing joey should have taken a 2x4 against his jewels.
Pat
USENS FROM KANTUK R GOOD AT LUVIN !
truly a wounderful love story ......... rich
that was good
i always like stories like that, they are just simply awesome!
meh...
no depth to characters and too simple a plot.
Chuckle - yup ... Equalized
An 18" piece of leather wrapped hickory axe handle works well too.
Thx ;-)
Excellent
True love is risking life and limb for the woman you love against a brute weighing a hundred pounds more than you and a foot taller. Great tale with a happy ending.
Yepper there are times
When you just have to step up and take the risk, you should, however, minimize it lol
Nicely done -
Sweet Story, But...
Unless they were just going to run off to City Hall even a small wedding would probably take at least 3 months to pull off anyway, so her parents' condition wasn't really much of a condition!
And frankly, if it was my kid, I'd get her on the pill, ask them to be discreet and give them permission to have sex before they get married,
Enjoyed it
a sweet story. Thanks.
Bigger Doesn't Always Mean Tougher
In school I was always one of the smallest kids in each grade until I reached the 6th grade. I had been picked on unmercifully. As a result I learned to fight back no matter how outmatched I was. I found out that even big guys hated being hurt. Meanwhile I built up a tolerance to pain. Then I started winning more fights than I was losing. And my challenges started dwindling. Following the 6th grade I underwent a monster growth spurt. Over the course of 15 months I shot up from 5'2" to 6'3". Fights were fewer and fewer. Then one day a bruiser on the football team decided he wanted to pound me into the turf. I was told later I took maybe a dozen of his best shots. Then I caught him on his jaw and he fell to the ground like a sack of concrete. He was out for a good 5 minutes, at least. That was my last fight in high school. No one picked on the 135-pound beanpole after that.
BIGGER ONLY MEANS
less space to share, TK U MLJ LV NV
Brings back memories
I was that tall slender kid in High School that got picked on all the time and the girls wouldn't give me a second look. Right out of HS I went into the Marine Corps and after boot camp went from 6'1'' 140 lbs to 6'1" 185 pounds of solid muscle. While home on leave, all of a sudden girls who wouldn't look at me in HS wanted to dance with me and go out together. When I came back from Viet Nam I practiced karate and taught self defense; in my home State I was undefeated for my weight limit. I've said all of this to say this, Don't ever underestimate the smaller guys. Oh, I became a very successful business man and married a beautiful woman inside and out.
LOVED IT
ALWAYS PROTECT WHAT YOU WANT AND WHAT IS YOURS....there is always that one jock asshole who thinks he has the right to walk over every body and take what he wants until someone stands up to him then knocks him down a peg or three...should have let her twin brothers loose on him....
interesting story about coming of age
well written, and nice application of song lyrics.
and it is part of a joint venture. or at least a mutual, but separate, project. the other story was posted on 05/06/07 by JakeRivers Titled Hey, Joe! if you are curious.
Nice
Nice guys do finish first!
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