A Case of Mistaken Identity

good story and please write more

your stories are always fun to read.give us more in the future.

Brilliant!!!

Yet another glimpse of Scorpio44's brilliance! A very entertaining tale of love, albeit incestuous, overcoming the odds to give us a happy ending. I feel sorry for his Ex. Since you give no evidence of her 'cheating'. As I read it, she divorced him when he was sent to China! Sorry, I have to advise greater proof reading care since throughout the story you call the hero Nick (who became Peter) yet at the end his original name is given as Alex! We also know that Elizabeth is Diane but who the hell is Barbara? Looking forward to the next one, Pete.

Oh my god, what the heck is wrong with you?!?

First I could care less if your personally into Incest or not. I could care who in the world is into it. But when you sneak in a story clearly about incest into any section other than what it really is, and then try to PRETEND that some folks might remotely find it to be incest, but if so then it could only be loosely defined as such, you are just purely misleading people for your own amusement. This was very strongly an Incest themed story

I say that because I've heard people say "If you sleep with your sister in-law/brother in-law its incest. I've heard if you sleep with a 3rd or 4th cousin, or anyone that could possibly share any of your families blood, it is. Even though, various state laws and other people might not agree with either of those senerios. That's why various states differ between what is incest and what is not. But in this story it was CLEARELY, INCEST regardless of who you might ask.

When I read your header I thought it might be a story about a distant cousin or relative, or even an in-law, who hooked up with the main character in this story where depending on where you lived they it might be incest, but his daughter?!? And you say some might consider it to be incest?!?! Who do you know who wouldn't consider it incest regardless of country or origin?!?!

What. Is. Wrong. With. You? You can't be this dense. You can't possibly write what you put as a header, put it in the romance section, and then write what you did as the story and then say it is possibly incest. There is no possibly to it, it was CLEARLY incest, no if ands or buts about it.

It very clearly either needed to go under Incest or you need a different warning at the top. Trying to say:

It may contain incest depending on how you define incest. The story wrestles with the question, 'Is it incest if you don't know you are related until after the sex?'

Let see, I define it by the defination used by "Websters" dictionary:
noun
sexual intercourse between persons too closely related to marry (as between a parent and a child)

I don't know what world you live in, but when someone has sex with their very OWN child, who they helped create and bring into this world, I challenge you to a single non-Deviant lifestyle person who won't look at you with disgust as you tell them you think sleeping with your child might not be incest.

Not for the first time I wished I could give negative numbers for a story. If you like incest stories go for it, that's your choice and I could careless what you choose to do in your life, but don't try and disguise a story as something different so you can "broaden" my mind. That is something that will never be acceptible to me and I'm really pissed you tried to pretend it was anything other than what this really was.

EWWWWWWWWW

-Risq

I Liked this Story and Disagree with the Comments

Putting this story into the incest category would have telegraphed the ending, although I will confess that I suspected that was what was happening early in the story. Yes, there were a couple of typos, but this is a good story - sad that Nick and his wife missed the rest of their lives together plus the 14 years - but still a good story. I liked how the mistaken identity rolled out a piece at a time. I don't usually like incest stories, but this one is quite well written. I think Risq's (who I usually agree with) comments are too long and too harsh (an over-reaction).

Nicely told

Well written with an interesting plot and backstory. Thank you, Scorpio44, for a unique story.

Homeboy

Not only was your story very good and your writing excellent, But it hit home as I grew up near Evergreen and Soto and El Typeyac is still one of my favorite places to eat. As a topper, I also graduated from Cal. State L.A.

I have enjoyed all of your stories so far, as they seem to be in my age range and sort of overlap with some of my own experiences. Great work, keep them coming.

Another good story

Not as good as "Scammed", but a very good story. I saw only one mistake in it.
srgeek

what did you mean by "how you define.....?

Incest is pretty clear in this case, and not at all iffy. Pete may not have known, but Diane/Elizabeth certainly did.

Love Is Great, Even When Taboo

The SEX IS HOT, and the development into the permanent love story is nicely depicted and evolved, if improbable because it's based on Elizabeth's multifarious deceits from moment one on. How can he avoid feeling nagging distrust of her on occasion? I am happy that they build a lasting, loving marriage and adore their children. And I hope they never lose the knack of driving each other into screaming multiple orgasms. But there will always be ifs -- sweet love works that way. Thank you for a FINE story.

Just super!

YOU are my favorite author.

This had the makings of a brilliant story

then you fucked it up by introducing incest in to it and the girl turning out to be his daughter. I enjoy incest stories but this one was ruined by it - it took away the mystique and thrill of him being mistaken for a spy - that side could have been developed as well as his idea for the PIF Foundation and made it really interesting - the incest killed it from being a damn good tale to just another dad fucks daughter and they ride off in to the sunset and live happily ever after mediocre plot.

Interesting story:

In really enjoyed this one. The twist about his driver being his daughter was predictable but I appreciated the warning in your preface that gave it away. I REALLY liked that you left open just who's intelligence agency arranged for the change in identity.

PAY OR PLAY IT

as long as its fast. TK U MLJ LV NV

We Need Another Chapter

Although the Ex had some bad words and hurt feelings upon his arrest, and transfer to China, statements by Diane/Elizabeth/Barbara(?), and statements attributed to the Ex by the same source clearly indicate how much she missed him, and how much she loved him. Remarriage after a divorce, especially in the belief that her MAIN MAN would be in a Chinese Prison for 30 years, with little likelihood of surviving, should not disqualify her from being given another chance, just because she thinks that he could not possibly forgive her for her actions, especially, when he clearly has.
The relationship with his daughter might put a crimp in re-uniting with the wife, but a writer of your skill should have no problem in constructing a plausible scenario, perhaps something along the line of your story "Either is Not the Only Choice."

VICE IS NICE BUT INCEST IS BEST

THAT WAS AN INTERESTING STORY from a different angle.....liked the way the girl took over looking after him and the idea of the PIF FOUNDATION....her flat mates were a hoot when they came in just because she had screamed when having an orgasm.....but then they were conveniently killed of but what happened to the flat mates who he agreed to finance...did that all fall through as they were supposed to be dead....never explained that bit...also it would seem his ex is still fond of him....perhaps they should meet but then she will think he and her daughter are both dead...strange conflict going on here...but at least they get to live together and raise kids but who the hell is Barbara??????...where did she pop up from.....

A CASE OF MISTAKEN IDENTITY

The story is good and good narration but I was wondering if the author slipped in mentioning Barbara (in lieu of Elizabeth ?).in the last but one para of the page 3(last page).

Incest pure and simple, there is no question about that, so how this author can say it depends on how you view incest is beyond me. Put your incest shit where it belongs.