All Comments on 'Clitty, Clitty, Bang, Bang Ch. 02'

Your writing is infectiously interesting and your people are fun and respectful of themselves and each other. It was more than credible with local flavor which is most interesting.<P>

Keep this up and we won't let you stop or rest.<P>

Author - you are appreciated and we look forward to more at interval.

With Very High Regard [so far]

Don't leave us here, you've opened several new doors, please paint & decorate now.

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Tell us about the old wife's new efforts to be difficult and vindictive. Simultaneously you could keep us informed as the greedy accountant demonstrates advanced levels of chicanery. Do the evil couple choose slander, bribery, financial/legal manipulation or hire thugs to use physical assault in their schemes to neutralize the efforts of our heroine to rescue the lovable but somewhat bumbling good guy? Will the hero continue to have bang access to her clitty? In the end will the low life duo be found chitty and unlovable? Oh please give us the answers to these riveting questions in the next few chapters. Inquiring minds want to know.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

I even love the title!

Great read, but could have been a bit more detailed at parts. Still, nice job nonetheless and keep on writing.

Slow it down a bit. These two stories are like chugging shots. You're writing from the "Land Down Under" , let us savor it a bit. Wombats flying through the air as cannon balls. I have to put up with the local wood rats A.K.A. deer, which frolic around the area because we are in close in DC suburbs and the Bambi lovers prefer to have them die of starvation than be hunted. Nothing like a two hundred pound stag in the fall rut making threatening gestures at you as you drive up to your house or go out to get the paper in the morning! 5*

but too much detail missed out....needed to fill in the blanks of what was going on and how the issues were resolved...too much left to the imagination...

Love it. AAAA++++