All Comments on 'Melanie & Her Coach Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
In for a penny...

He thought in for a penny, but he'll get life of child support.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
eh

I was good till no protection, he would be the one who was SCREWED if he knocked her up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
nice

I liked it all of it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
He took away her motivation

The reason she's going along is to pursue a soccor career.

Throwing in that he doesn't care if she gets pregnant would cause her to run for the hills

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
At this point?

"It was at this point I knew I could do what I wanted." REALLY, sounds like you already did pretty much everything thing you wanted. What an assfuck next, I think she would have been down with that much more. I understand your Coach is driven by lust, but why the need to self destruct. Fucking her is one thing, but knocking her up just gets you fired and possibly arrested. Dumb.

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