Sea cucumbers, when aggitated (or sucked) do not release their "seed." They are vomitting out their internal organs. Otherwise nice twist on mermaid.
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Anonymous11/16/07
Great story!
Great story, had a scary intensity to it as well. Awesomely well written, and don't mind tbe previous reader about how the sea cumcubers release their organs, although it may be true it perhaps would of dimished the fictional story. (Techicially since it is fiction of course it could be seed)
Regardless, excellent story, scary and erotic.
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Anonymous03/09/10
Whew...
That is really hot! You should have someone else encounter the mermaid.
English
GREAT!
What an absolutely GREAT story!
Hope you write more like these!!!
VERY Erotic and kinky....
just fyi
Sea cucumbers, when aggitated (or sucked) do not release their "seed." They are vomitting out their internal organs. Otherwise nice twist on mermaid.
Great story!
Great story, had a scary intensity to it as well. Awesomely well written, and don't mind tbe previous reader about how the sea cumcubers release their organs, although it may be true it perhaps would of dimished the fictional story. (Techicially since it is fiction of course it could be seed)
Regardless, excellent story, scary and erotic.
Whew...
That is really hot! You should have someone else encounter the mermaid.
Cool
Sequel please! :)
Wish he lived and there was a sequel
Wish he lived and there was a sequel
Mermaids are not soul suckers
I guess this mermaid was half succubus.
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