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Better left as a 'stand alone' story!!!
Sorry Waltario, this 'final chapter' had no place in this tale and, although well written and entertaining, was better left as a 'stand alone' story. The epilog (ending?) was rushed suggesting that you were running out of ideas! Next time cut back on the repetitious and tedious lesbian sex and expand the contents of the epilog for a better story. Again some annoying misuse of English grammar but altogether quite enjoyable. Pete.
Great Girl on Girl Sex!!!!
Oh my God you must have witnessed girl on girl sex in your life. This story kept my panties wet the whole time. I agree with Peatbog that it should have been a stand alone story but I did not find the sex tedious or repetitious. Looking at your profile you said that you brought women inot your relationship with your secretary. How hot was that? I could only imagine a man in the same bed as two women made love. I told my girlfriend about this story and she can't wait to read it and I know good things will come of that for both of us. More Please!!!
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