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My Take on Blowing With Words

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by Anonymous

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by gtr7605/01/07

Contest or no contest, this one is a winner!

Thank you for the lesson, and the three beautifully wrought blowjob stories. Each had a very real personality. You really know what you are doing and your tips for making each scene believable are well demonstrated. Thanks for helping have a wonderful start to my morning!

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by skywriterxxx05/01/07

Very well done...

...and quite obviously written from direct experience with the subject matter...

A gold medal contender here!

~Sky~

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I need to stay after class.

Uhm, okay, I read this a couple of times but I really think that I am going to need to stay after and learn this. What time can you come over to help me study?

I've chilled some wine and bought a couple of lobsters. Let me know when I can expect you.

Actually, I was hoping this piece was longer. It could have been better, I think, because you only scratched the surface. Yet, what you wrote was creative and fun.

Thanks for the read and good luck in the contest.

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by Oral Rex05/01/07

An artist at work!

Here's a writer that can tailor the words to give the reader a new perspective. That's a step beyond an inspired amateur who can convey a personal experience to others but can't move it past the personal angle. It seems that many writers here get stuck, once they've blown their wad of personal experiences. Thanks for the lesson.

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by Rumple Foreskin05/01/07

I was simply "blown away"

You have a real knack for these, Red. Keep up the good work, so to speak. And good luck in the contest.

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by Boxlicker10105/02/07

Really Well Done

This was really well done, the best I have read yet. And, you are right: The way to write a good sex scene is with a lot of details, such as you demonstrated. I am known for including a lot of details, but you have surpassed me. I have one quibble, though, about the pro. Generally speaking, somebody sucking a cock would strongly object to the man holding onto his or her head, especially when deep-throating. The one providing the mouth has to be in charge, or qagging is a strong possiblilty.

Good luck in the contest.

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by Northsider05/02/07

EXCELLENT!!!

I really loved it; you really have a knack for capturing the vibe of the situation!

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by Northsider05/02/07

EXCELLENT!!!

I really loved it; you really have a knack for capturing the vibe of the situation!

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excellent!

I loved the way you described each story. Maybe this will help me in future endevors.

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by ShiggyMoto05/03/07

Excellent guide

I will be referring to this guide often for my stories. ^_^ I've found great inspiration in your other how-to's as well.

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by l8bloom05/03/07

6 stars out of 5

Captivating! I was especially impressed with "her worn throat" -- what a concise description of such a character -- and "you don't get to dive into his mind, but you can with just a few key words, give the reader a hint as to what he was feeling." That's powerful advice for all kinds of writing. Good luck in the contest, this story is a winner. : )

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by 05/03/07

whohoo - this is the blowjob contest

thank you for this how-to, and good luck in the contest!

Maharat

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by RogueLurker05/06/07

definitely one to be bookmarked

this is a great how to, red. informative and interesting - I found the passages you included to help illustrate your points. Thank you. I'm off to look at your other how to's ...

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by Selena_Kitt05/11/07

Loved it!

I loved your "kiss" how to, and I think this one ties if not beats it... Nice job, Red, you're really good at these!

Selena

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by Anonymous05/16/07

The first of many

This is the first work I have ever read by this author. It surely will not be the last

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by Anonymous05/18/07

Love your articles

I shared one of your articles with my lover and now we are both hooked on your stories. In turn, he now reads them online and shares what he has read with me. Please continue the good work!

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by Tink4Fairy05/21/07

Nice!

Great descriptions!

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by MarshAlien05/23/07

You really blew this one!

It was horrible. You obviously need a lot more practice. When and where shall we meet? Seriously, very well done. And I liked the writing, too.

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by 05/23/07

Very nicely done

Red, glad you're back and feeling better. I love the examples you use in these how tos.

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by DG Hear05/24/07

Nicely done Red!

I gave this some heavy thought. If a woman takes a man's penis (see the nice wording I'm using?) into her mouth, does she suck it or blow it? Good question-Yes?
If a mans spreads his womans legs and buries his face in her vagina (see, still talking nice to a nice red haired fiend) Does he suck or blow? Again, a good question-Yes?
Damn, now I'm hot from all this heavy thinking.
Good Job Red
DG Hear

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by Rumple Foreskin05/24/07

Thanks, Red

Short of first-gland experience, this easy-to-swallow info is hard to beat. No writer of erotica should blow it off, so to speak.

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by starrkers05/28/07

Licks pencil...

Not that pencil!! I was taking notes.
Jeeze, you people. Thanks Red, and good luck in the contest.

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by Anonymous09/13/08

Another great How-to

Thanks so much for writing these articles! As a new author it is extremely helpful to have examples of different scenarios. You're really doing a service here to help people like me become more effective writers. Thanks again.

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by MaiDawtons10/07/09

Thank you!

I found this very helpful, not only for blowjobs, but in every aspect of writing erotica. Tone is very important, thank you for all your very imformative articles.

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by D34THROW08/31/10

Holy Christ.

That scene was incredible...I don't put too much oral sex into my stories, but I might just do it now...

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Nice!

This is a nice piece! I'm glad I gave it a go. I'll have to read more of your stuff.

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by CanadianM09/08/12

Well Done

I enjoyed this one and how you contrasted the different ways of describing the act. Well done..

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