You have great talent in story writing. Loved your detailed vivid way of doing the story. Only one part made it cheesy. Him cheating on his girlfriend in all four stories sadly made the story line only three stars at the most instead of five at the least. Dump that infidelity stuff, it just turns people off, losing erotic sensations in the middle of reading your stories.
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You have great talent in story writing. Loved your detailed vivid way of doing the story. Only one part made it cheesy. Him cheating on his girlfriend in all four stories sadly made the story line only three stars at the most instead of five at the least. Dump that infidelity stuff, it just turns people off, losing erotic sensations in the middle of reading your stories.
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