I love this story. Wicked ending. Literally!
The ending is such a neat play on the meaning of "joy."
A whole lot of things twited about very neatly into the dark pit that is the ending. I enjoyed it very much.
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Lovely
I love this story. Wicked ending. Literally!
I agree
The ending is such a neat play on the meaning of "joy."
Very Clever
A whole lot of things twited about very neatly into the dark pit that is the ending. I enjoyed it very much.
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