almost perfect except i prefer some dialogue
this is a hott story....she must be hot to write this.
Normally I like dialogue in a story, but this one seemed to be more about the heat of the moment, and thus worked well in silence. Very sexy.
Wow, very hot and transported me back to a similar occasion with my man and our best friends in their hot tub ... it was a fantasy come true and one I hope to repeat next time we visit! Stories like this help me revisit the heat of the moment! :-)
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