ultimately and eventually she will come to realize that it was not mark's fault; it was her hubby's. it has been at his encouragement to share her previous sexual encounters, things to a woman that are personal,private, and even sacred. this even led to her creating fantasy escapades for his titillation. in the bedroom she admits that the hubby has sent the cuz hoping the wife will give him some pussy. and overcome with excitement, he joins them thereby actually sanctioning her adultery. can she be faulted for responding to the pounding of mark's big cock? of course not. so when hubby offers offers her his meat for sucking, in heat she jumps at the chance to suck one while at the same time get one stuffed in her; but this is what he wants. this may be a fantasy of her own; it is for many women. but the guilt feelings are quite normal, and so are the results. she has lost respect for this guy anyway; and the robust fuck provided by his cuz only confirmed her feelings. she just hasn't gotten there yet. at the present, she is attempting to keep things together. but this is wasted effort. the rose pedals on the bed do more to embrace and caress heart than the temporary fuck of the hubby, for it is here in the heart that the keys to her pussy are kept. long before the doorbell rang, the bell had tolled for him. the door bell at the conclusion of this chapter on confirms the truth that title to her heart and pussy are being transferred to a new owner. in time she will complete the cuck; she will sit him in a chair in the corner of the bedroom and let him watch, which is probably what he's wanted to do from the beginning.
by
Anonymous05/11/07
stupidity at its' best
why was he in the bedroom with his wife fucking when the doorbell ring,that why this shit so stupid.don't go to the door.
by
Anonymous05/11/07
Horrible In So Many Ways
This submission should never have made it past the reviewers. It is so poorly written it is literally nothing but a random collection of words.
by
Anonymous05/14/07
You will get better
It's much easier to criticize than to write a story in the first place. The story is not as bad as some of the commenters have stated. If you are just starting to write you might ask a more experienced writer to review your work before submission. That's how we all learn.
by
Anonymous01/15/09
questions
did he ask her to wait before coming to the bedroom so he could ring mark??
cant wait to read the follow up, keep up the writing, ignore the comments from people who hate these stories but yet still read and comment on them.
English
oops, hubby lost his pussy
ultimately and eventually she will come to realize that it was not mark's fault; it was her hubby's. it has been at his encouragement to share her previous sexual encounters, things to a woman that are personal,private, and even sacred. this even led to her creating fantasy escapades for his titillation. in the bedroom she admits that the hubby has sent the cuz hoping the wife will give him some pussy. and overcome with excitement, he joins them thereby actually sanctioning her adultery. can she be faulted for responding to the pounding of mark's big cock? of course not. so when hubby offers offers her his meat for sucking, in heat she jumps at the chance to suck one while at the same time get one stuffed in her; but this is what he wants. this may be a fantasy of her own; it is for many women. but the guilt feelings are quite normal, and so are the results. she has lost respect for this guy anyway; and the robust fuck provided by his cuz only confirmed her feelings. she just hasn't gotten there yet. at the present, she is attempting to keep things together. but this is wasted effort. the rose pedals on the bed do more to embrace and caress heart than the temporary fuck of the hubby, for it is here in the heart that the keys to her pussy are kept. long before the doorbell rang, the bell had tolled for him. the door bell at the conclusion of this chapter on confirms the truth that title to her heart and pussy are being transferred to a new owner. in time she will complete the cuck; she will sit him in a chair in the corner of the bedroom and let him watch, which is probably what he's wanted to do from the beginning.
stupidity at its' best
why was he in the bedroom with his wife fucking when the doorbell ring,that why this shit so stupid.don't go to the door.
Horrible In So Many Ways
This submission should never have made it past the reviewers. It is so poorly written it is literally nothing but a random collection of words.
You will get better
It's much easier to criticize than to write a story in the first place. The story is not as bad as some of the commenters have stated. If you are just starting to write you might ask a more experienced writer to review your work before submission. That's how we all learn.
questions
did he ask her to wait before coming to the bedroom so he could ring mark??
cant wait to read the follow up, keep up the writing, ignore the comments from people who hate these stories but yet still read and comment on them.
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