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Walking Behind You

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by Anonymous

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by FallingToFly05/07/07

You already know what I think

So I'm just letting you know I was here.

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by CeriseNoire05/09/07

Nice

I enjoyed the overall mood and flow in this piece. I may have punctuated some lines differently, but that's really a matter of preference.

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by starrkers05/09/07

Definite thumbs up

I think I got the better end of our bargain ;) Nice pace and mood and lovely sentiment.

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