I agree! this story deserves to be continued! Hot hot hot!
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Anonymous05/18/07
First submission?
I do believe there is great hope for you. You gave enough detail to allow me to "see" your story, but not so much you bored me. I enjoy "non-human" stories alot and I do hope you continue this story. Maybe 1 or two more submissions with this one and then move on. I don't think this will be one you can stretch out for to many chapters. Best of luck!! I will be watching for more.
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Anonymous05/19/07
Great start...
Great start...keep up the good work and am looking forward to seeing where your story goes...
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Anonymous06/16/07
Lovely
Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous06/16/07
I'm on the trail...
You have a great way of making the story flow (among other things ;>) Keep up the good work. You definitely have talent! I can't wait to read more! Write faster!
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great!
Great start! Please continue!
more please!
I agree! this story deserves to be continued! Hot hot hot!
First submission?
I do believe there is great hope for you. You gave enough detail to allow me to "see" your story, but not so much you bored me. I enjoy "non-human" stories alot and I do hope you continue this story. Maybe 1 or two more submissions with this one and then move on. I don't think this will be one you can stretch out for to many chapters. Best of luck!! I will be watching for more.
Great start...
Great start...keep up the good work and am looking forward to seeing where your story goes...
Lovely
Keep up the good work.
I'm on the trail...
You have a great way of making the story flow (among other things ;>) Keep up the good work. You definitely have talent! I can't wait to read more! Write faster!
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