All Comments on 'How do we move on'

by rose butterfly

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darkerdreamerdarkerdreameralmost 17 years ago
shows promise

in less conventional lines like "Letting you in, to know my heart", other lines bring up more questions than the ones you pose, in the last stanza especially. The poem feels like it is missing an ending, maybe the end hasn't happened yet but it will need one eventually. Also, don’t use MS Word, it capitalizes every line ;) Keep writing

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