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by Anonymous

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by Bill Dada06/02/07

^

I can't believe no one has commented on this one. Did it scare them away.

I love
'Our weapon
becomes the enemy'

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by EroticOrogeny05/07/10

Quite compelling

Seems to capture the addicts situation well.

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by twelveoone03/11/11

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this doesn't quite give enough to determine metaphor, from not.

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