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by skip.6905/14/07

Brilliant

Like all your other stories. I wish that I lived near you, Mrs. Canyon. And what a lucky husband you have that he encourages you to indulge this way!

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by sarge1305/14/07

Hot

Very nice, hard to do in even in a SUV, but a fun story.

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by Anonymous05/14/07

No imagination?

Shit dude I have a hard cock and it's about to burst. Many writers have written about their wives getting fucked by other men. My wife got fucked a lot by other men. She did it over and over again and we never tire of the repetition. Now shove that up your nerd ho hum asshole...Oh I'm talking to the creep just under me...hey that's a good place for you creep...under me while I ram my cock in your mouth. Take no notice of the creep or anyone that doesn't like your story...oh ...God...I'm cumming...ooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......ooooooooooooohhh hhhhhhhhh......ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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by Anonymous05/15/07

hillariously high school

So the play game is whatever you say.....really not original.
So the number of 4 friends....why not 40 with horse sized dicks (rhetorical)
The wife plays the part of a piece of meat and there is nothing erotic about that or seductive in your writing about directing a slut fest.
This was poorly done.

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by Anonymous05/15/07

I loved it

I love hot loving wives you get filled! Nice work!

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by stu421v05/27/07

Lucky guy

Loved the story, you are a lucky man to have a hot wife like that - keep them stories coming and that will keep us cumming

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by Anonymous06/07/07

Great Stuff

I really get a kick out of these stories ....... don't ask me why because I daresay that if it was me that was the husband, I'd want to kill them all.
But, that is the whole point of stories and fantasies; you can do anything you like to anyone you like.

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by marriedpervs07/16/09

MMmmmmmarried pervs loved it

Loved,loved, loved, LOVED it! Wild, wicked, wanton and fucking horny. I really enjoyed this story and it inspired a fingers in my pussy session of my own as a result!

Thanks sooo much!

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