All Comments on 'Melanie & Her Coach Ch. 03'

I liked this story, hot. Thanks for not beating around the bush. I like that you developed what was happening right away. Nice.

begging for a sequel

Please keep going. I want to read more and find out what happens

So where is that other encounter in which she gets breed?

Please oh PLEASE some more!! this was soo hot, got me hot then got me off, thank you so much for your creative writing!!

A fun, hot read. I could have done without the multiple poop chute references, especially right as he cums... how corny. Unless you were actually trying to be funny. In that case, I'd have a good laugh if a guy said that to me. I Hope you continue with this story line.

That completely ruined it. Giggled and I couldn't finish reading the story.

Whuuut?

This needs a sound track. I'm thinking the music they played during the silent films where the evil guy twirled his long mustache and tied the helpless young thing to the railroad tracks.