Love your stories. Never know what to expect. Here you are writing from the female gender. Can't wait to see where this ones is going.
An avid reader of DG Hear
Very good start DG and I am looking forward to the next chapters. You are again writing in a woman’s point of view and I look forward to some of the female commentator’s analysis. I sure hope Literotica keeps them coming in succeeding days as you expect. Thank you for this entertainment and all the wonderful efforts you always give.PT
DG i loved how Sarah told Leonard where to go and what he could do with his life he was a real bastrd i hope to read more of the is story i love it.
Pat
its a nice change to see the Husband being the self centered asshole but this part is...just...well UNBELIEVEABLE...
"You son of a bitch. I'm getting a divorce and I never want to see you again. I can't believe that I married a man who didn't even want his child. You go back to your big empty house and look and sit around and stare at all the pictures of your dead wife. We could have had a good life and a family but all you could think about is yourself. I want nothing more to do with you. Please leave my room
Frnakly I cant believe HER! Given what we KNOW about this woman... street smart educated wise finanical person who marries a guy 15 or 20 years OLDER... yet they NEVER discussed the issue of Children?
EVER????
Nah.... that is Just too hard to believe
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Anonymous05/16/07
Very good
I've liked all your stories, but if this one keeps going the way it has started it will, in my opinion, be your best one.
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Anonymous05/17/07
Sarah's soapy saga
got nailed in high school; got raped in college; married a man who did not want children (duh, the dude's 47 and already had grown children: Sarah's a stupid little hick who had just graduated from college!); divorced him because of nothing else but that he simply didn't want another kid.
Date another man and he pimped her out to get a promotion and got it, so he cries big tears, but promises to make it up to her. She cries and tells us how badly she feels and how these men --- lovers and foes alike --- are fucking her silly.
WTF! Is there ANY POINT to this silly Sarah saga; when does woman learn; when does an author learn, that a story is too stupid and perhaps it ought not be written?
Sarah is pretty adamant about wanting her baby, huh? I can understand an old man not wanting more kids, though. Well, maybe Sarah can find what she really needs--A younger man that wants kids. Very good writing.
The story's pacing is a bit slow, and the plot isn't tightly focused, being more a rambling narration of Sarah's life. The hook didn't grab my attention, and the narrative drive of this chapter is weak.
Sarah's surprise pregnancy demonstrates a basic fault in her marriage. Neither partner really puts the other first. The accidental death of the fetus precipitated the divorce but a break-up was likely to happen in any case. I agree with Harry: it's hard to believe that, despite their differences, that Sarah and Leonard had never discussed having children, particularly since she is in her prime child-bearing years.
have talked about kids. Both of them were very motivated about having kids ... just unfortunately from differing perspectives. He was kind of cold about it.
Interesting story with good detail.
Regards, Jack
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Anonymous05/28/07
Like
the story,but just one very minor point to mention.When Leonard first met her his surname was Nelson,but after they were married she says she is Mrs Leonard White,did he change his name?
English
Nice start DG!
Love your stories. Never know what to expect. Here you are writing from the female gender. Can't wait to see where this ones is going.
An avid reader of DG Hear
a well-told story
Very interesting, not at all predictable. I look forward to see where you take the story!
Thanks, ohio
Good Stuff
Please don't make us wait to long for the next part. I enjoyed this story.
A very good new storyline from DG
Very good start DG and I am looking forward to the next chapters. You are again writing in a woman’s point of view and I look forward to some of the female commentator’s analysis. I sure hope Literotica keeps them coming in succeeding days as you expect. Thank you for this entertainment and all the wonderful efforts you always give.PT
A Good beginning DG
DG i loved how Sarah told Leonard where to go and what he could do with his life he was a real bastrd i hope to read more of the is story i love it.
Pat
Nice change of Pace BUT difficult to believe
its a nice change to see the Husband being the self centered asshole but this part is...just...well UNBELIEVEABLE...
"You son of a bitch. I'm getting a divorce and I never want to see you again. I can't believe that I married a man who didn't even want his child. You go back to your big empty house and look and sit around and stare at all the pictures of your dead wife. We could have had a good life and a family but all you could think about is yourself. I want nothing more to do with you. Please leave my room
Frnakly I cant believe HER! Given what we KNOW about this woman... street smart educated wise finanical person who marries a guy 15 or 20 years OLDER... yet they NEVER discussed the issue of Children?
EVER????
Nah.... that is Just too hard to believe
Very good
I've liked all your stories, but if this one keeps going the way it has started it will, in my opinion, be your best one.
Sarah's soapy saga
got nailed in high school; got raped in college; married a man who did not want children (duh, the dude's 47 and already had grown children: Sarah's a stupid little hick who had just graduated from college!); divorced him because of nothing else but that he simply didn't want another kid.
Date another man and he pimped her out to get a promotion and got it, so he cries big tears, but promises to make it up to her. She cries and tells us how badly she feels and how these men --- lovers and foes alike --- are fucking her silly.
WTF! Is there ANY POINT to this silly Sarah saga; when does woman learn; when does an author learn, that a story is too stupid and perhaps it ought not be written?
Not Your Normal Fare But
perhaps your best to date - lead on.
With High Regard
Good story
Sarah is pretty adamant about wanting her baby, huh? I can understand an old man not wanting more kids, though. Well, maybe Sarah can find what she really needs--A younger man that wants kids. Very good writing.
A fair start
The story's pacing is a bit slow, and the plot isn't tightly focused, being more a rambling narration of Sarah's life. The hook didn't grab my attention, and the narrative drive of this chapter is weak.
Sarah's surprise pregnancy demonstrates a basic fault in her marriage. Neither partner really puts the other first. The accidental death of the fetus precipitated the divorce but a break-up was likely to happen in any case. I agree with Harry: it's hard to believe that, despite their differences, that Sarah and Leonard had never discussed having children, particularly since she is in her prime child-bearing years.
Yep! Sarah and Leonard should
have talked about kids. Both of them were very motivated about having kids ... just unfortunately from differing perspectives. He was kind of cold about it.
Interesting story with good detail.
Regards, Jack
Like
the story,but just one very minor point to mention.When Leonard first met her his surname was Nelson,but after they were married she says she is Mrs Leonard White,did he change his name?
Enjoyed it
Very well written. Odd that they wouldn't have discussed kids prior to marrying, given his age.
We all have our history
We are shaped by and own the way it makes us live and defines our needs -
She has the strength to move where she needs to so she can live her own life.
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