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Melody's Day At The Office

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/16/07

pretty bad

sorry, but this was poorly written with a badly executed plot.

-sarah

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by dtm5205/16/07

Yeah, right...

Fantasy is one thing, but this is totally unbelievable, devoid of any intimacy and pretty much a waste of space.

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by Anonymous05/23/07

try again

There was potential to the story line but it was poorly written and didn't flow well.

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by Anonymous04/10/10

this story gave me a vaginal infection

If it's been up my arse and is covered with crap, it does not get fed to kitty - ok? That's a fine way to spread some very nasty infections.

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by Anonymous04/20/13

wow

This was hot. It was fast and short, but nonetheless, fulfilling.

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