All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Party Toy Ch. 01'

looking forward to where this goes

OK, Bone, lets get on with it...

The story has a lot of potential.

Please continue- and make it HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my. that is very hot.

Great, I'm looking forward to details of the party....

Very good, very imaginative, very hot!

Really enjoyed this short story, and will most definitely read the other two chapters! Not my typical story at all, so I'm surprised how hot it made me!

Keep writing!

OK, now I'm curious...

...even though I've got no real picture of characters here except nurse and dude in a cock cage, you've got an easy style and the story flows well; and now I'm intrigued for the party and who he meets there. Will drop by later to see what's going on!