All Comments on 'Outside the Door'

Sorry I couldn't it the mark it deserved

Just what people want and need sometimes. Very good!

This is one of the worst-written stories I've ever read. I love women and I love sex with women. But, you're the kind of lesbian that makes me physically ill.

This story was well written and started and ended just as it should. Clearly these aren't erotic lesbians, this is a DS relationship between two women. It is what it is, within the confines of the quick story the characters were adequately developed and the context and structure of their relationship made the sexual interplay make sense.

Just because someone has a preconceived notion of what a lesbian relationship looks like doesn't negate the quality of this story. Keep it up.