Hi! Great story full of intimate sexual detail. We both read it together in bed, got very horny and followed with a delicious fuck. We hope our story "24 hours" will have the same effect on you, and your partner if you have one.
Hi! Great story full of intimate sexual detail. We both read it together in bed, got very horny and followed with a delicious fuck. We hope our story "24 hours" will have the same effect on you, and your partner if you have one.
Tom and Sue x
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Anonymous10/01/07
Could have been better
While the beginning of the story had a merit the plot slowly deteriorated. It was never explained why Jake did what he did. What was his connection to her grandfather. How did he know what was going on. I think it could have been much more detailed. Nicely written though.
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Anonymous08/14/16
Hard to understand
Disjointed, not enough details to make it interesting, or believable.
English
THANK YOU!
Hi! Great story full of intimate sexual detail. We both read it together in bed, got very horny and followed with a delicious fuck. We hope our story "24 hours" will have the same effect on you, and your partner if you have one.
Tom and Sue x
THANK YOU!
Hi! Great story full of intimate sexual detail. We both read it together in bed, got very horny and followed with a delicious fuck. We hope our story "24 hours" will have the same effect on you, and your partner if you have one.
Tom and Sue x
Could have been better
While the beginning of the story had a merit the plot slowly deteriorated. It was never explained why Jake did what he did. What was his connection to her grandfather. How did he know what was going on. I think it could have been much more detailed. Nicely written though.
Hard to understand
Disjointed, not enough details to make it interesting, or believable.
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