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THANK YOU!
Hi! Great story full of intimate sexual detail. We both read it together in bed, got very horny and followed with a delicious fuck. We hope our story "24 hours" will have the same effect on you, and your partner if you have one.
Tom and Sue x
THANK YOU!
Hi! Great story full of intimate sexual detail. We both read it together in bed, got very horny and followed with a delicious fuck. We hope our story "24 hours" will have the same effect on you, and your partner if you have one.
Tom and Sue x
Could have been better
While the beginning of the story had a merit the plot slowly deteriorated. It was never explained why Jake did what he did. What was his connection to her grandfather. How did he know what was going on. I think it could have been much more detailed. Nicely written though.
Hard to understand
Disjointed, not enough details to make it interesting, or believable.
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