Throw her and her lover onto it and watch them burn.
She is the lowest manipulative bitch around. Burning at the stake is to nice for her.
by
Anonymous03/26/11
I don't think so
Fine she likes this, but at least let the husband off the hook and away from her. He likes children, then let him have them with someone that cares, with him and he's the father. Pays the bills and supports the cow, and she has such regard for him.
yeah that wasnt that bad. sounds like she really loves her husband but also wants to have fun. as long as he never finds out i think they would have a wonderful life. like your other story "angie's valentines baby" long as husband doesnt know and is happy to be a dad. who is it really hurting?
by
Anonymous05/17/11
manipulation and deceit
Any positive impulses here are just screwed up. Husband is around to support children not his own, and no sense of loyalty to him, and certainly not fidelity. Does husband get to have sex with anyone here?
Jeeeeezuuuuussss! Do any of you people even read the story? The husband got lots of sex. He just wasn't able to father a kid, and his dick wasn't enormous, as seems to be the requisite for these cuckold stories.
It has been my and my wife's experience that IRL big dicks are no barometer for a man's real successes. Some of her biggest lovers are mediocre at best, in all life's metrics.
Most women who cheat do so out of need, and a big dick isn't high on the list. It's neglect, lack of intimacy, sometimes simpply a desire for change. And the people they cheat with are usually not rich, overly smart, or overly manly. They usually cheat with someone who shows them affection. Period.
However, because of the almost impossible big cock part of the story, it is only a 4 **** story.
Nothing wrong with a woman having sex with a better looking man. That is almost all women do. However, only men want big cocks. Women have no interest in big cocks.
We have evolved so that normal size is best. Average is slightly less than 6". If larger size was an evolutionary advantage of even 1% per generation such as if women prefered larger cocks the the average size would be larger. Until the last 100 years a woman's first child was usually before age 20 and in the Stone Age it was low teens.
Therefore, if a larger cock gave a 1% advantage over that last 1,000 generations (less than 20,000 years), natural selection would dictate larger cocks. A 1% advantage for even 1,000 generations is huge. That is 1.01^1,000 = 21,000 to 1 advantage. Therefore, writing that women want big cocks is a strong indicator of low intelligence.
After 20 years the husand could start law suit against DNA father to pay child support settlemt (1-2 children), when the DNA father gathered much money and paid the mortgage. The husband start a around the World travel from the settlement to stop for 2 weeks on Bora Bora.
@Dwornock You are right only 30% of the women depend on large cocks, 70% of women works with normal cocks well, morover the majority of the women get lack of parts on the vaginal mucous membran from enormous cocks. They will be pain for days same to the lack of parts in mouth mucous membran.
I hope once the DNA test would be obligatory for all husbands after the childbirth and after DNA test negative result the mother should decler who might be the father....
by
Anonymous09/17/11
lol
great stories damn some are your readers are angry people..lol keep up the good work and continue this story
by
Anonymous10/10/11
you said dont blame the wife
After all she did nothing, except, break her marital contract; commit adultry; foster a bastard upon her husband; become a common slut; place her self and her husband to potential disease risk repeatly; continously lie and cheat; have no morals or principles; deny a child is rightful place and medical history; and damage her own, her childs, and her husbands lives while destroying her marriage. Sooner or later medical test or some other reason will force the proof of the bastards history and the husband will divorce her and probably seek child support for her bastard. Nope nothing at all to blame her for in this except the fact she is braindead and amoral.
... she is evil. She, without consultation, makes her husband a cuck, and has him raising another man's child. Oh, and let's not forget the possibility of disease.
Yah. With wives like her, who needs serial killers?
I thought a woman was the author of this story until I read the bio. You can write but your story line sucked. That's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing.
by
Anonymous12/01/11
Johnnie can have children with someone else, and she and paul can figure things out, together or separately
Couldn't find one character in this pile of drivel that had any good features at all 1*
by
Anonymous04/27/12
My wife had a baby with one of her lovers. It was a turn on for me
by
Anonymous06/06/12
Paul knocked her up and she was keen for that to happen, so they should be reesponsible for the resulting children; and John, he needs to be free of all of them.
For John, he can get out with minimal harm and have his desires for children elsewhere.
by
Anonymous11/27/12
Very hot
Great story
by
Anonymous01/26/13
just a cheat story
hopefully she gets run over by a car or a disease the kids deserve a good parent and person which she is neither.
yep....just human trash.... birthing more trash.(yeah, yeah, yeah, they're innocent babies....carrying trash genes.... to be raised by "mothers" with no morals. State prisons are filled with men raised y such mothers..... so are whorehouses)
Hi Paul, we have never met but we something in common. You are going to spend the rest of your life paying for those kids you made with that big cock. Don’t worry, I will let my wife have it when ever she wants, I will keep it in a jar for her. You on the other hand will have to earn your money with your ass and I keep all the money. This is my friend Pedro and has the perfect position for you; looking like a bike rack at a fag biker bar. Cathy will be working with you too, well in the same line of work, bye bye
by
Anonymous09/26/13
another dumbass fool
with whiskey wishes and cuckold lover dreams............-21,300,000,000,000 stars
by
Anonymous01/24/14
none
enjoyable, a good read
by
Anonymous01/27/14
I liked it 5*****
Thought I had read all your stories but somehow missed this one.
Thanks, tom anon
by
Anonymous10/01/14
i loved it!!!
you have got to write a sequel. we have got to know if cathy moves in with lizzie and if they have another baby by paul and if they might have one other with their new lover later, or does paul marry cathy.that would really a perfect ending,lizzie and cathy sharing cath's husband.think about it .see you later. bob w.
This is a story for 1*, but it would be easily a 5*, if...If she and the bastard child died in the child-birth freeing her husband to happyness...When the author tell us to understand her, I would if she liking it so much had chosen to be a whore...No need to be married...She and her friend could have a Brothel...
why and how people cheat. A one time thing or short affair is... forgivable.
But this.
This behaviour is reprehensible. To willingly deceive your adoring husband, to connive to set him up as a cuckold in the original meaning of the word, just so you can have a revolving door of ginormous dicks is beyond acceptable.
Don't judge her? Really?!? You must be part of the 'nonjudgmental crowd'. You know the one that's totally fucked up this country with political correctness and such. Are you sure your name shouldn't be Scurvy? You probably just misspelled it.
It's really very simple; if the story or the characters disgust you, stop reading. And spare the rest of us your vitriol. You are not responsible for writing it. You are only responsible for reading something you seem to hate. Shame on you!
by
Anonymous02/10/15
spinner45, I know this is your life story
but have some pride and name the child after his father. This was nothing more than a idiot with a keyboard. It sucks as much as spinners wife.
Amazing! The level of viciousness in the comments is almost beyond belief. I wonder why. Is it some kind of campaign? Seriously, I wonder why so many people take so much trouble to spew it?
if you read the opening comments, that most readers would not like the characters, that it was an unpleasant subject matter, and many would be angry.
"Many readers will hate her, will want her punished for her perceived sins."
you will understand that the goal of the author is to stir up, anger, and make fun of the average reader.
And that is exactly what has happened. scouries is sitting off to the side, reading all the comments, laughing.
It never ceases to amaze me the haters on this site will spew out all the hate for a story they read all the way thru. I hardly see them comment on a story they liked. I think they secretly liked it because they read it but can't admit to it so they spew out this garbage.
Bravo Writer on a job ell done to expose these haters for what they are.
I personally, though, liked this story very much. It's the type of story I love to see more often in this section rather than the kick the bitch to the curb type of stories.
Thanks for the read,
John
by
Anonymous05/31/15
Wow!
You know, this happens more often than not. A married woman commits an indescretion and ends up pregnant. The one-night-stand won't leave her alone. Their sexual relationship continues to the delight and also the chagrin of the married woman. Too young to not dream of babies, she has his love child and her husband makes a good DAD. The rest is of course, fantasy, but good fantasy. The married woman really might try to fix up her single friend with the Paul character, hopeing to shift his attention to the friend. Don't listen to complainers. Someone who thinks Literotica femal characters should behave like Donna Reed should go elsewhere.
Another lying deceitful whore. Having a good man raise someone else's bastard kid. Someone like her should have her fucking tubes pulled out by hand and have her pussy sewed together and then thrown out with the trash the lying cunt.
by
Anonymous06/02/15
Not All That Surprising
A story like this brings to mind the best advice every husband / father should heed. "Trust but verify". Thank the stars for all future fathers there is DNA testing. Should be mandatory for every child born. Only read part and got the gist of this. 1* for not BTB.
and it looks like a long range operation. TK U MLJ LV NV
by
Anonymous07/19/15
It may not be her fault that she likes it
It is her fault that she has no self control, no loyalty and allows herself to become a complete cheating slut. Like you said - horrible characters, bad story.
by
Anonymous05/10/16
the absolute worst type of woman, with no love, respect, or loyalty for her husband
death becomes her, the fellow adulterer, and the bastard. Ever wonder why men kill their wives and children?
by
Anonymous05/10/16
5
to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote because his wife left him a cuck and he mad. So he takes it out on the writers of these stories.
by
Anonymous08/23/16
Five stars
Erotic and sexy. A woman get the baby she wants and the cock she needs.
by
Anonymous10/15/16
More garbage
Pray whoever knows this coward fag writer will punch him in his cuck throat for pretending to be a man........ Fucking useless idiot....
by
Anonymous12/28/16
where is the sequel?
Mr Scouries seems to tire quickly of a story line and not always finishes his stories.
This story has all potential for a follow-up in which Johnny, Cathy and Lizzie live together. They should get it out in the open about Paul and the others to come ...
hey
you talk like a human, but your not are you your just a sick fuck who should stay away from children.
ditto
I agree with the first 3
Once again I just wish to start the bondfire
Throw her and her lover onto it and watch them burn.
She is the lowest manipulative bitch around. Burning at the stake is to nice for her.
I don't think so
Fine she likes this, but at least let the husband off the hook and away from her. He likes children, then let him have them with someone that cares, with him and he's the father. Pays the bills and supports the cow, and she has such regard for him.
good story
yeah that wasnt that bad. sounds like she really loves her husband but also wants to have fun. as long as he never finds out i think they would have a wonderful life. like your other story "angie's valentines baby" long as husband doesnt know and is happy to be a dad. who is it really hurting?
manipulation and deceit
Any positive impulses here are just screwed up. Husband is around to support children not his own, and no sense of loyalty to him, and certainly not fidelity. Does husband get to have sex with anyone here?
I have to laugh
Jeeeeezuuuuussss! Do any of you people even read the story? The husband got lots of sex. He just wasn't able to father a kid, and his dick wasn't enormous, as seems to be the requisite for these cuckold stories.
It has been my and my wife's experience that IRL big dicks are no barometer for a man's real successes. Some of her biggest lovers are mediocre at best, in all life's metrics.
Most women who cheat do so out of need, and a big dick isn't high on the list. It's neglect, lack of intimacy, sometimes simpply a desire for change. And the people they cheat with are usually not rich, overly smart, or overly manly. They usually cheat with someone who shows them affection. Period.
I loved it.
However, because of the almost impossible big cock part of the story, it is only a 4 **** story.
Nothing wrong with a woman having sex with a better looking man. That is almost all women do. However, only men want big cocks. Women have no interest in big cocks.
We have evolved so that normal size is best. Average is slightly less than 6". If larger size was an evolutionary advantage of even 1% per generation such as if women prefered larger cocks the the average size would be larger. Until the last 100 years a woman's first child was usually before age 20 and in the Stone Age it was low teens.
Therefore, if a larger cock gave a 1% advantage over that last 1,000 generations (less than 20,000 years), natural selection would dictate larger cocks. A 1% advantage for even 1,000 generations is huge. That is 1.01^1,000 = 21,000 to 1 advantage. Therefore, writing that women want big cocks is a strong indicator of low intelligence.
What would Johnnie think?
How many bastards can these bitches get Johnnie to pay for? It is not a check that I would willingly write.
After 20 years the husand could start law suit against DNA father to pay child support settlemt (1-2 children), when the DNA father gathered much money and paid the mortgage. The husband start a around the World travel from the settlement to stop for 2 weeks on Bora Bora.
@Dwornock You are right only 30% of the women depend on large cocks, 70% of women works with normal cocks well, morover the majority of the women get lack of parts on the vaginal mucous membran from enormous cocks. They will be pain for days same to the lack of parts in mouth mucous membran.
I hope once the DNA test would be obligatory for all husbands after the childbirth and after DNA test negative result the mother should decler who might be the father....
lol
great stories damn some are your readers are angry people..lol keep up the good work and continue this story
you said dont blame the wife
After all she did nothing, except, break her marital contract; commit adultry; foster a bastard upon her husband; become a common slut; place her self and her husband to potential disease risk repeatly; continously lie and cheat; have no morals or principles; deny a child is rightful place and medical history; and damage her own, her childs, and her husbands lives while destroying her marriage. Sooner or later medical test or some other reason will force the proof of the bastards history and the husband will divorce her and probably seek child support for her bastard. Nope nothing at all to blame her for in this except the fact she is braindead and amoral.
Despite your admonishment...
... she is evil. She, without consultation, makes her husband a cuck, and has him raising another man's child. Oh, and let's not forget the possibility of disease.
Yah. With wives like her, who needs serial killers?
WOW!!!
I thought a woman was the author of this story until I read the bio. You can write but your story line sucked. That's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing.
Johnnie can have children with someone else, and she and paul can figure things out, together or separately
No Good Characters in this
Couldn't find one character in this pile of drivel that had any good features at all 1*
My wife had a baby with one of her lovers. It was a turn on for me
Paul knocked her up and she was keen for that to happen, so they should be reesponsible for the resulting children; and John, he needs to be free of all of them.
For John, he can get out with minimal harm and have his desires for children elsewhere.
Very hot
Great story
just a cheat story
hopefully she gets run over by a car or a disease the kids deserve a good parent and person which she is neither.
Slut nurses.....who'da thought!
yep....just human trash.... birthing more trash.(yeah, yeah, yeah, they're innocent babies....carrying trash genes.... to be raised by "mothers" with no morals. State prisons are filled with men raised y such mothers..... so are whorehouses)
must admit the dialogue was nicely written.
Hi Paul, we have never met but we something in common. You are going to spend the rest of your life paying for those kids you made with that big cock. Don’t worry, I will let my wife have it when ever she wants, I will keep it in a jar for her. You on the other hand will have to earn your money with your ass and I keep all the money. This is my friend Pedro and has the perfect position for you; looking like a bike rack at a fag biker bar. Cathy will be working with you too, well in the same line of work, bye bye
another dumbass fool
with whiskey wishes and cuckold lover dreams............-21,300,000,000,000 stars
none
enjoyable, a good read
I liked it 5*****
Thought I had read all your stories but somehow missed this one.
Thanks, tom anon
i loved it!!!
you have got to write a sequel. we have got to know if cathy moves in with lizzie and if they have another baby by paul and if they might have one other with their new lover later, or does paul marry cathy.that would really a perfect ending,lizzie and cathy sharing cath's husband.think about it .see you later. bob w.
Sweet..................
How to be a 5* story...
This is a story for 1*, but it would be easily a 5*, if...If she and the bastard child died in the child-birth freeing her husband to happyness...When the author tell us to understand her, I would if she liking it so much had chosen to be a whore...No need to be married...She and her friend could have a Brothel...
I understand
why and how people cheat. A one time thing or short affair is... forgivable.
But this.
This behaviour is reprehensible. To willingly deceive your adoring husband, to connive to set him up as a cuckold in the original meaning of the word, just so you can have a revolving door of ginormous dicks is beyond acceptable.
Vile
Vile Troll Bait
if you think that people who behave this way aren't evil
You're one sick mother fucker
Vile Slut
Don't judge her? Really?!? You must be part of the 'nonjudgmental crowd'. You know the one that's totally fucked up this country with political correctness and such. Are you sure your name shouldn't be Scurvy? You probably just misspelled it.
To: the last five commenters
It's really very simple; if the story or the characters disgust you, stop reading. And spare the rest of us your vitriol. You are not responsible for writing it. You are only responsible for reading something you seem to hate. Shame on you!
spinner45, I know this is your life story
but have some pride and name the child after his father. This was nothing more than a idiot with a keyboard. It sucks as much as spinners wife.
Looked at all the comments!
Amazing! The level of viciousness in the comments is almost beyond belief. I wonder why. Is it some kind of campaign? Seriously, I wonder why so many people take so much trouble to spew it?
the author has succeeded
if you read the opening comments, that most readers would not like the characters, that it was an unpleasant subject matter, and many would be angry.
"Many readers will hate her, will want her punished for her perceived sins."
you will understand that the goal of the author is to stir up, anger, and make fun of the average reader.
And that is exactly what has happened. scouries is sitting off to the side, reading all the comments, laughing.
at us.
Oh Brother!
It never ceases to amaze me the haters on this site will spew out all the hate for a story they read all the way thru. I hardly see them comment on a story they liked. I think they secretly liked it because they read it but can't admit to it so they spew out this garbage.
Bravo Writer on a job ell done to expose these haters for what they are.
I personally, though, liked this story very much. It's the type of story I love to see more often in this section rather than the kick the bitch to the curb type of stories.
Thanks for the read,
John
Wow!
You know, this happens more often than not. A married woman commits an indescretion and ends up pregnant. The one-night-stand won't leave her alone. Their sexual relationship continues to the delight and also the chagrin of the married woman. Too young to not dream of babies, she has his love child and her husband makes a good DAD. The rest is of course, fantasy, but good fantasy. The married woman really might try to fix up her single friend with the Paul character, hopeing to shift his attention to the friend. Don't listen to complainers. Someone who thinks Literotica femal characters should behave like Donna Reed should go elsewhere.
YUUP
Another lying deceitful whore. Having a good man raise someone else's bastard kid. Someone like her should have her fucking tubes pulled out by hand and have her pussy sewed together and then thrown out with the trash the lying cunt.
Not All That Surprising
A story like this brings to mind the best advice every husband / father should heed. "Trust but verify". Thank the stars for all future fathers there is DNA testing. Should be mandatory for every child born. Only read part and got the gist of this. 1* for not BTB.
A LOT OF DECEIVING GOING ON
and it looks like a long range operation. TK U MLJ LV NV
It may not be her fault that she likes it
It is her fault that she has no self control, no loyalty and allows herself to become a complete cheating slut. Like you said - horrible characters, bad story.
the absolute worst type of woman, with no love, respect, or loyalty for her husband
death becomes her, the fellow adulterer, and the bastard. Ever wonder why men kill their wives and children?
5
to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote because his wife left him a cuck and he mad. So he takes it out on the writers of these stories.
Five stars
Erotic and sexy. A woman get the baby she wants and the cock she needs.
More garbage
Pray whoever knows this coward fag writer will punch him in his cuck throat for pretending to be a man........ Fucking useless idiot....
where is the sequel?
Mr Scouries seems to tire quickly of a story line and not always finishes his stories.
This story has all potential for a follow-up in which Johnny, Cathy and Lizzie live together. They should get it out in the open about Paul and the others to come ...
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