All Comments on 'Seduction'

by Jennyeou

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BenLongBenLongalmost 17 years ago
Nice job.

Welcome back Jenny, I see it's been a while. I liked it. Sure, maybe it can use some improvements, but most of us have writing that can use improvement. Looking forward to your next effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Too tall

7 feet 3? Really? I’ve never met anyone that tall in my life. And I’m old!

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