All Comments on 'Not My Type'

Great build. Waiting for chapter two.

come on dont leave me hanging. you made your story so real. keep it coming.

cliffhangers....they aren't bad if the cliff isn't too big. when's the next one coming? :) good story.

Fantastic build up, great characters, tremendous voice and the heat...shit, I had to turn up my air conditioner. You are now my idol. I want to write like you when I grow up.

Your stories are consistently awesome, and hot. Can't wait for the rest of this.

Reading along...loving it...and it's over!!! Acck! Can't wait for the next chapter!

...who I think it is? =D I loved your prervious two stories & am hoping that you're still going to finish, "I Thought I Hated Him." This one has that same sexy build up; you manage to keep it so casual & everyday while sexing it up. Thanks for the read - as always, looking fowards to more.

Another HOT story! Please write another chapter soon and to I Thought I Hated Him too!!

Oh my gosh! I just realized that the bartender is Shaun from Hell Yeah! Awesome! That was a great story also!

I LOVE how sexy your stories are, but also how very ordinary. The realism just makes it hotter! And your setting and characterisation is pitch perfect - once again! Also love the added touch of a Mr Shaun in there! Zera x By the way, please keep going with your "I thought I hated him"!

Can't wait for the second!

Another great story from a great writer! How do you come up with them? Please write many more chapters to this! And don't forget about 'ITIHH'

breathless with anticipation, speechless in admiration.

It amazes me how you are able to make the simplest situations burn with sexual tension. Your dialogue between the friends is well done and incredibly believable. This lady is very good, one of the very best on this site.

LOVE YOU!!

I can't wait for the second part!

on to the next chapter. btw, the writing is excellent.

This story matches me and my two best girls entirely! I found myself dying with laughter at how much it sounds like us, me being the shy, curvy one. I love it!

You really have a way of connectin with your readers. The scenario is believeable yet still sexy! Keep it up! - also love how you added Shaun in as the bar keeper!! :D

I'm really liking the characters so far, can't wait to read more.

It's not really what I was looking for; it's definitely women's erotica. :P But it's very well written.

You are a really fine writer. Your dialogue and characters are believable and natural. Love all the fine details that make the story real, too. I especially enjoy your sense of humour. You make me smile and laugh. Wonderful!

Whew! It sure is hot in here. And I laughed out loud at Rhi's comment to see if there really is a difference between girls.

Need I say more?

Reading this story again, and it still is as good as it remembered!

Oh, because I put this one on my favourite list :-)

Seriously, like I have to tell you, I love all of your stories and I cannot wait to read more about the entire clan. Maybe someone should find you a publisher! Just my humble opinion.

Your devoted reader!

Vic

love this first story. i know its old now but none the less as good as the day it was first written. still as eritic anf horny brilliant writing

You know I got half way through Adele's story when something popped into my head. This story has its beginning just after a blonde, a brunette and a readhead have walked into a bar, intentionally on your part or otherwise. :D

Still not all the way through but this is definitely the best 'a blonde, a brunette and a redhead walk into a bar' story I've read. Thanks for writing!

Hilarious!

staking claim? okay i'll read more...

No wonder you've written so many of them.

Your story is like the menu of a world-class new restaurant.

I'm already licking my lips for what's next!

Oka-a-a-y . . . chapter one and we know she's a slut. Let's see what comes next.

To previous anon- FUCK OFF

a slut

1 star cause she's a slut in chapt 1

The story is great and well written. Great beginning!

To the previous anonymous comments below: You're reading porn....what does that make you? Besides stupid, of course : )

i've read this story multiple times, but i've never noticed the anonymous comments that call lilly a "slut". lol. slutshaming. get out of here.

lovely story and writing, regardless :)

Thanks

and I do like it, aha...aha....hahaha

I've read an re-read this series COUNTLESS times (like, at least 30-40) and I never get tired of it. Each time is as if I'm reading it for the first time again. Great characters, fantastic storyline and just the hottest most sensual moments even without any sex.

Great character intro, looks like a helluva series, looking forward to what you've built with Lily and her friends.

J

I enjoyed your previous stories and this one has started really well.

However, why is it that all writers describing women talking together only ever allow them three conversation topics. Periods, babies and the size of men's dicks ? Oh sorry, four topics, how many times the men with the big dicks can fuck in a night.

Really ?

and no ¨cocking eyebrows¨!

thanks...

Great opening...got me hooked!

Easy 5...really looking forward to 2-!

I have been seduced over and over by this open bit of First Kiss's story. As a guy, I am always amazed at female chatter about the things that we males don't have the openness (or security) to discuss - or even recognize. Adam is a dream and I wish that I could have been him. This is just a brilliant piece of writing - now 15 years old and well loved. Whatever happened to First Kiss? We could all do with Lilly and Adam today.