First time I couldn't read something because there was too much Dialog. The character's seem like they're addressing each other from over the phone, they tend to have no expression (for example After she asks for wine, Laura asks "what's wrong?" But there's no expression in Mary's person so you can't get a feel for how she behaves.) The two characters have some emotion in their voice(though even that feels dry), but their body language is lacking (let alone fucking and response)
I don't think it belongs in unconsensual though, as long as it has two women it's lesbian (unless one of those women is crossdressing or is a transman)
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not many lesbian
this should be in noncon its all about rapes
Too much?
First time I couldn't read something because there was too much Dialog. The character's seem like they're addressing each other from over the phone, they tend to have no expression (for example After she asks for wine, Laura asks "what's wrong?" But there's no expression in Mary's person so you can't get a feel for how she behaves.) The two characters have some emotion in their voice(though even that feels dry), but their body language is lacking (let alone fucking and response)
I don't think it belongs in unconsensual though, as long as it has two women it's lesbian (unless one of those women is crossdressing or is a transman)
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