All Comments on 'The Hard Body Clerk's New Beginning Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Style

All the Hard body stories, have so much description that they keep the readers interest, I mean how many times has a blow job been written about, generally they are very similar. This author has given us great descriptions which make it unique to the reader(not to mention viewing it in the minds eye as you read it) is a talent few authors posess. Keep it up, the continuing stories of the hard body clerk are always a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More

Cmon buddy. you need to extend the series. let's go

be_cruel13be_cruel13almost 17 years ago
Exactly

I totally agree with the first comment... Throughout all of dsloan's stories, I've felt like Cori in this story: "Cori was surprised by Norm's request and she didn't surprise easily." I don't suprise easily either (shit, once you've read enough of these stories, all of the plotlines of the mediocre-level ones start to blur together) but this author always manages to push the story (and Cori) that one more step more into extreme hotness and sexiness... Keep it up! :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Breakfast in Bed

Yummy!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Cindy here

These story's are great. Makes me want to be doing the same.

Hope the rest of the story keeps going in the same direction.

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.