Opposites Attract Ch. 01

More more more!!!

That was brilliant. When's the next one? I NEED the next one! I can tell this series is gonna be fantastic. GIVE ME MORE!!!

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So far so good - I will be looking foreward to the next chapter.

~Bryan

Nice

I very much enjoyed this peice of wrighting. I do love a good wolf story so i am very pleased you didnt go with any of these other generic plotlines. Thank you for your talent, Good luck and good wrighting!
A friend

'wolf

It's disturbing to read this repeatedly. Yes, it's correct for werewolf, but the apostrophe isn't necessary - we know what kind of wolf it is.

"Good to see your still here Mark"
That YOUR should read YOU'RE (YOU ARE, apostrophe indicates missing letters)
YOUR means BELONGS TO YOU.
OUR means BELONGS TO US.

"Its not my fault I always get left to man the table."
ITS should read IT'S (IT IS, apostrophe indicates missing letters)

Try to learn about correct use of apostrophes - it's difficult to read text smoothly if it has these kinds of mistakes in.