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by GAnnE05/20/07

Class A+ Training!~

Dave is a great teacher and YOU have the right stuff, too,
for very strong anal eroticism! We get to learn also from
both of you...so MORE LESSONS PLEASE!! Nicely written and
some great details!

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by Anonymous05/20/07

Nice, but ...

Don't just SAY that the husband took her to the edge of orgasm but wouldn't let her cum, describe it IN DETAIL, from his point of view AND from her's.

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by Anonymous09/20/14

Step 3, Step 4, Step 5

Simple, Yet Descriptive & Believable. When will you continue?

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by RoseSlut6812/03/15

Great Story

I hope to see more from you, The only complaint I have is that the chapters are a bit too short. But other than that they are absolutely Amazing!

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