I enjoyed this from a first-time author. So simply told and so plausible. Looking forward to the sequel.
Havent been on the Enterprise for years N I R should give you a concession fare for your great publicity, now where is my rail timetable
This was very nice, but I would have liked to see some dialogue. I think it would have made your story even better. I also think it would have made her "last statement" more memorable at the end.
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Where do I catch this train?
I enjoyed this from a first-time author. So simply told and so plausible. Looking forward to the sequel.
Enjoyed your story
Havent been on the Enterprise for years N I R should give you a concession fare for your great publicity, now where is my rail timetable
Very nice.
This was very nice, but I would have liked to see some dialogue. I think it would have made your story even better. I also think it would have made her "last statement" more memorable at the end.
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