All Comments on 'The First of Many'

wonderful story of a girl working her way up in the world. In modern day it is but fantasy as most of these girls are ruled by drugs, infections, and medical treatments dying by the late 20s mostly if not killed by some nut in the mean time. I have met in a rather large city two girls married to their pimps. Both died of medical complications gotten by activities involving their trade in their early 20s. One a very beautiful blonde from a small rural town whose bodyfriend made good money on her working bachelor parties for the most part. Nope their is no such thing as safe random sex.

A clip from your story:

"Maman told me that, while many girls were no more than thirteen years old when they began as prostitutes she would not let me decide on my future until I reached eighteen. In the mean time I learned as much as I could about the art of the seductress so than when I was ready, if I decided to go down that path, I would be able to command as high a price as maman. Grandemaman let me use a peephole to watch as the couples had sex so that I could learn the different positions and the noises that the girls made to please and flatter their clients."

How did you get this past the Lit censors? Right now your story is being discussed and disected on the board. According to the site rules ZERO sexuality is allowed in characters under 18. You stated that your character "learned how to have sex", etc., before 18.

i loved how this story explored the depth of emotion a girl can have when she is waiting to be a woman. thank you and it made me think of many beautiful memories younger_female xx

you are who you are

Lovely to read an erotic story, written in good taste, most beautiful, Thank you

A nice story. The comment by the last "person" was totally uncalled for. Some people are almost inhuman!!

underaged sex and grooming kids to be whores is not on in this day and age....nothing good or romantic or funny about this....just sleazy...

Short, simple, and wonderfully written