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Anonymous04/24/12
pathetic
What a poorly written story by some bitter person.
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Anonymous02/26/14
needs more editing
decent story but poorly written. You repeated the same things over and over, such as: "I decided to punish him," and went into detail that distracted from the story, such as when describing her wrestling exploits. Also, 2000 men and 1900 women? really? a twelve inch STEEL dildo? I suggest more realistic facts
I enjoyed the overall premise but to more editing would greatly improve your writing would make your stories more popular
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you ne3ed to learn that ppl are different. usin some bbw woman and constantly talkin about her "twin" isnt sexy its rather a turn off. quit yappin about gays and real men. get to the good part. who cares if she was a wrestler, foot ball player ect. she acts way to manly
pathetic
What a poorly written story by some bitter person.
needs more editing
decent story but poorly written. You repeated the same things over and over, such as: "I decided to punish him," and went into detail that distracted from the story, such as when describing her wrestling exploits. Also, 2000 men and 1900 women? really? a twelve inch STEEL dildo? I suggest more realistic facts
I enjoyed the overall premise but to more editing would greatly improve your writing would make your stories more popular
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