All Comments on 'Poolboy'

This is a hot story. but it must be continued. I'm sure more readers would like to read more escapades between these two men

what a great story I got so turned on wishing I was getting fucked in that pool house. Great story I hope theres more to cum :)

Please continue this storyline. Maybe something from Dylan's view? Nonetheless, this was an awesome story!

that was one horny story keep them cumin hehe!!!!

awsome my dick got so hard reading this would love to see what it feels like to have a man suck me off then fuck him in the ass.

Write some more, get Dylan to bring another friend for a 3 way fuck. I want Dylan with a cock in both ends at once.

I really like your stories, but I always feel that I need a follow-up.

I'd wish also that you and other writers would pay a little more attention to spelling. For instance, when you write "[...] I could smell his musty sent.", I'm sure you meant "[...] I could smell his musky scent.", because "musty" is related to "mold", while "musky" is related to a strong, sweet smell. We use the word "sent" in sentences like "I've sent a letter to her.", while "scent" means "aroma, smell".

I would further say that when you wrote "On the next try his public hairs touched my nose.", you really meant "On the next try his pubic hairs touched my nose.", even if it would have been a public show to anyone watching the hot action. ;-D

Wonderful story - got me real hot. Keep writing